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==Summary==
 
==Summary==
[[File:Edith Keeler and Jim Kirk.jpg|thumb|Edith Keeler and Jim Kirk]]
 
 
===Teaser===
 
===Teaser===
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[[File:Sulu after cordrazine treatment.jpg|thumb|right|Sulu is revived by two drops of cordrazine]]
In orbit around an unexplored planet, the {{USS|Enterprise|NCC-1701}} is on [[red alert]] as it passes through violent [[displacement wave|time distortions]] surrounding the planet. During one of these events, the center console on the [[bridge]] sparks and [[lieutenant|Lt.]] [[Hikaru Sulu|Sulu]] is injured. Doctor [[Leonard McCoy|McCoy]] is called to the bridge for emergency first aid. He prepares a [[hypo]] of [[cordrazine]], warned by [[James T. Kirk|Kirk]] that it is "tricky stuff".
 
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In orbit around an unexplored planet, the {{USS|Enterprise|NCC-1701}} is on [[red alert]] as it passes through violent [[displacement wave|time distortions]] surrounding the planet. As the ship plots their orbit, [[Montgomery Scott|Scotty]] warns that the control circuits are threatening to overload. No sooner does [[Captain]] [[James T. Kirk|Kirk]] acknowledge the report, than the center console on the [[bridge]] explodes and [[Lieutenant]] [[Hikaru Sulu|Sulu]] is injured. Scotty takes the helm as [[Doctor]] [[Leonard McCoy|McCoy]] is called to the bridge for emergency first aid. Scotty questions if the ship should break orbit, but [[Spock|Mr. Spock]] advises against it - the ship is literally passing through ripples in time and it is of great scientific importance that they remain and investigate. Kirk agrees and orders [[Nyota Uhura|Uhura]] to broadcast to [[Starfleet Command]] his past week's [[log entry|log entries]], detailing the unusual readings on the instruments that has diverted the ''Enterprise'' to this planet. McCoy arrives and diagnoses Sulu with a [[heart flutter]]. He prepares a [[hypo]] of [[cordrazine]], warned by Kirk that it is "tricky stuff." Fortunately, the two drops administered by McCoy successfully revives Sulu.
   
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[[File:McCoy experiencing cordrazine frenzy.jpg|thumb|left|McCoy, suffering from a cordrazine overdose]]
After Sulu is revived, the ship rocks violently as it passes through another time displacement. McCoy falls on the hypo and is injected with an overdose of the red liquid. He shouts in pain. The drug induces paranoia and McCoy breaks free from [[Spock]]'s hold on him and escapes the bridge. Kirk scrambles security teams.
 
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Scotty reports that the ''Enterprise'' is nearly clear of the time ripples, which Spock confirms, with one heavy displacement directly ahead. The ''Enterprise'' shudders violently as it collides with it, causing Dr. McCoy to slip on the helm console and inject the loaded hypospray into his abdomen, emptying its contents into his bloodstream. Kirk and Spock rush to his aid, but McCoy darts up in a panic. Raving and screaming about "killers" and "assassins", McCoy breaks free from the concerned bridge crew and flees the bridge via the turbolift. Kirk orders a [[security alert]].
   
 
===Act One===
 
===Act One===
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:"''Captain's log, supplemental entry. Two drops of cordrazine can save a man's life. A hundred times that amount has just accidentally been pumped into Dr. McCoy's body. In his strange and wild frenzy, he has fled the ship's bridge. All connecting decks have been placed on alert. We have no way of knowing if the madness is permanent or temporary or what direction it will drive McCoy.''"
McCoy evades the security teams, reaches the [[transporter]] room, disables [[Lieutenant]] [[Kyle]] and transports to the planet.
 
   
 
Dr. McCoy evades the security teams and enters the [[transporter room]] where he attacks [[Lieutenant]] [[Kyle]], steals his [[phaser]] and energizes the transporter.
Kirk, Spock, [[Nyota Uhura|Uhura]], [[Montgomery Scott|Scott]], [[Galloway]] and another security officer beam down to look for McCoy. They discover the source of the time displacement, a rough, egg-shaped ring. It introduces itself as the ''[[Guardian of Forever]]'' and begins to display the history of [[Earth]] through the center of the ring. A curtain of mist descends across the images.
 
   
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On the bridge, Kirk has returned from [[sickbay]], where the ship's medical department in uncertain of what McCoy's condition will do to him. Spock, having consulted the [[library computer]], discovers that patients exposed to such a level of cordrazine would fail to recognize acquaintances and become hysterically convinced they were in mortal danger, becoming extremely dangerous to himself or anyone else nearby. Suddenly, the transporter room calls the bridge and informs Kirk that McCoy has beamed down to the planet, with the transporter at the time being focused on the center of the time disruptions on the surface. Kirk orders a [[landing party]] set up to retrieve Dr. McCoy.
McCoy is discovered and subdued by a [[Vulcan nerve pinch]]. After the struggle, Kirk and Spock return to the portal. Spock is upset that he is not recording the events visible through the portal. He begins recording. McCoy awakens and realizes he can escape through the Guardian. He races past Spock and Kirk, through the Guardian, and into Earth's past. Then Uhura notes that contact with the ''Enterprise'' has been lost. The Guardian explains that history has been altered, resulting in the ship's absence.
 
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[[File:Crew observes the american revolution.jpg|thumb|right|"''I am the Guardian of Forever.''"]]
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Kirk, Spock, Scotty, Uhura, and a security detail transport down and discover a ruined city with an unusual looking portal in the midst. As Uhura and Scott's teams search for Dr. McCoy, Kirk and Spock investigate the object. Spock reports that it is the center of all the time disruptions, although he cannot explain how it is possible. The object, though it appears inert, is in fact generating powerful enough waves of displacement that the ''Enterprise'' could detect millions of miles away. Kirk asks what it is and a loud, booming voice intones from the object "''A question! Since before your sun burned hot in space and before your race was born, I have awaited a question."'' The object identifies itself as the [[Guardian of Forever]], explaining that is both machine and being, while also being neither. Spock deduces that the Guardian is a [[time portal]] - a gateway to other times and dimensions, to which the Guardian confirms is correct and activates its portal, offering Kirk and Spock a gateway into [[Earth]]'s past.
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Suddenly, Dr. McCoy cries out - he has been cornered by the search parties. Still madly convinced they are killers and assassins, he tries to escape, but is subdued by a [[Vulcan nerve pinch]], courtesy of Spock. Kirk ponders if they could use the Guardian of Forever to take Dr. McCoy backwards a day in time to make certain that his accident never happens. However, the portal's speed is moving fairly quickly, jumping from century to century. Spock suddenly realizes that his [[tricorder]] is capable of recording images at the same speed and activates it, just as Dr. McCoy regains consciousness. As the landing party is transfixed on the Guardian, they do not see him jump up and run towards the portal until it is too late. McCoy jumps through it and the portal shuts down. When Kirk wonders where he went, the voice of the Guardian explains "''He has passed into... what was...''"
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Uhura suddenly discovers that she's lost contact with the ''Enterprise.'' Scotty finds nothing wrong with the [[communicator]]s, but the Guardian further explains that "''Your vessel, your beginning, all that you knew is gone.''" Kirk makes the horrible realization that Dr. McCoy has somehow changed history, stranding the landing party on the planet with no past and no future. Uhura tells Kirk she's frightened, but, Kirk is equally as disturbed.
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:"''Earth's not there... at least, not the Earth we know. We're totally alone.''"
   
 
===Act Two===
 
===Act Two===
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[[File:Time planet remastered.jpg|thumb|left|The Guardian's planet]]
Kirk and Spock are forced to enter the portal to stop McCoy from changing history. Before leaving, Kirk orders Scotty, should they fail to correct history, to use the portal to return to the past so that at least they will remain alive. Spock uses his [[tricorder]] recording to estimate the appropriate time for their leap.
 
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:"''Captain's log, no stardate. For us, time does not exist. McCoy, back somewhere in the past, has effected a change in the course of time. All Earth history has been changed. There is no Starship ''Enterprise.'' We have only one chance - we have asked the Guardian to show us Earth's history again, Spock and I will go back into time ourselves and attempt to set right whatever it was that McCoy changed.''"
   
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The tricorder scans Spock took just as McCoy left reveal that he jumped back to the early [[20th century]] and can approximate when they should jump through the portal, putting them possibly a month or a week prior to McCoy's arrival. Kirk wonders how they will return to the their own time, but the Guardian tells him that if he is successful in mending the timeline, they will all be returned, as if none of them had gone. Scotty and Uhura are skeptical about their chances, but Spock logically states that there is no alternative. Kirk, however, out of concern for his officers, tells each of the landing party to jump through the portal if they feel like they've waited long enough for he and Spock to return, allowing them to live in Earth's past rather than be stranded on the Guardian's planet should they fail to find the time date McCoy jumped to. Scotty and Uhura bid them good luck as Kirk and Spock jump backwards through time.
The two arrive on Earth in the [[United States of America]] in the year [[1930]]. They are obviously out of place with their [[Starfleet]] uniforms and Spock's pointed ears. Kirk steals clothes from a fire escape to aid in their disguise. A [[police]]man catches the two in the act, but he is subdued with a Vulcan nerve pinch. With other law enforcement hot on their heels, they duck into a soup kitchen called the [[Twenty-First Street Mission]]. There they meet [[Edith Keeler]], who runs the shelter.
 
   
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[[File:Kirk-Spock in 1930.jpg|thumb|right|"''We seem to be costumed a little out of step with the time.''"]]
Upon explaining to her that they have no money, Keeler offers them jobs cleaning the mission at a pay-rate of 15¢/hr for 10 hours a day. After lunch, Keeler compliments Kirk on the work he and Spock did in the basement and asks if they have a [[flop]] for the night. She informs him that there's a vacant room where she lives for $2/week.
 
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They arrive in [[New York City]], circa [[1930]]. Kirk recognizes the period from old photographs, which Spock clarifies that [[Great Depression|an economic upheaval]] had occurred at this point in time. As passersby scrutinize Kirk and Spock's unusual appearance, they make for a back alley to get out of sight. Kirk notices some contemporary clothes on a fire escape and elects to steal them, as their [[Starfleet uniform (2265-2270s)|Starfleet uniforms]] are not suited for the time period. However, they are apprehended by a [[police officer]]. As Kirk woefully tries to explain Spock's [[Vulcan]] ears, the policeman prepares to arrest them. However, Spock disables him with a nerve pinch and they escape to the basement of the [[21st Street Mission]].
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[[File:Kirk and Spock sweeping the floor.jpg|thumb|left|Kirk and Spock find jobs at the 21st Street Mission]]
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After changing clothes, Spock laments that locked in his tricorder are the images of how McCoy will change history. Unfortunately, he would need to tie it into the ''Enterprise'' computer to access the information. Kirk wonders if he could build a computer aid using contemporary materials, but, Spock is dubious as to its success. As their voices carry, they are accosted by the proprietor of the mission, [[Edith Keeler]]. Kirk apologizes for their intrusion and tells her the truth as to why they came down there - that they had stolen their clothes because they had no money and were being chased by a policeman. Believing them to be victims of the poor economy, Edith offers them jobs at the mission doing chores at fifteen cents an hour for ten hours a day. Kirk and Spock agree and set to cleaning up the basement.
   
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Hours later, they are eating their complementary dinner of soup and bread with the other poverty-stricken citizens, when Keeler takes the stage and gives a motivational speech about how she believes the days ahead are worth living for, theorizing that one day soon, man will be able to harness the power of the atom, which could ultimately propel them into outer space, where they will be able to find ways to feed the hungry millions of the world, to cure their diseases and give mankind hope and a common future. Kirk is impressed with her foresight into the future, while Spock believes it to be merely intuition. Afterwards, Keeler compliments Kirk on his and Spock's work in the basement and offers them further work and sets them up with an apartment in the building she lives in.
Unable to view the video acquired on the tricorder to determine McCoy's arrival date and the cause of the timeline contamination, the two spend their combined salaries on supplies to modify its rate of playback. After their third day of work, Kirk returns from shopping with radio tubes, wires and other items. Spock is noticeably frustrated at the lack of technology in the [[1930s]]. After several setbacks, the tricorder reveals Keeler's imminent [[obituary]] – but also an incompatible report that Keeler met with [[President of the United States|United States President]] [[Franklin D. Roosevelt]] six years hence. She cannot have two futures; they've discovered the point where McCoy altered the past. But how?
 
   
"''What if Edith Keeler must die?''" Spock asks Kirk.
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[[File:Edith Keeler and Jim Kirk.jpg|thumb|left|Goodnight, sweetheart.]]
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Several days later, Spock is hard at work attempting to build the computer aid to access the information in his tricorder, but he laments the speed at which the work is progressing as the technology of the 20th century is barely adequate. The next day, Spock observes a man using tools for finely detailed work and steals them from the mission's toolbox. Keeler is very upset that Spock did it, but Kirk is able to convince her that Spock meant no ill will. Edith agrees, as she has become fascinated by Kirk, and asks him to walk her home. The two become close as Keeler questions where Kirk comes from and how he sees the world the same way that she does.
   
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[[File:The Star Dispatch.jpg|thumb|right|"''The President and Edith Keeler conferred for some time today...''"]]
===Act Three===
 
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After a few more days, Spock is finally able to access the information in the tricorder, where he discovers Keeler's 1930 obituary - her death the result of a traffic accident. As Kirk enters, he attempts to replay it for him, but another images appears - a newspaper article from six years later, detailing a meeting Keeler has with [[Franklin D. Roosevelt]]. Unfortunately, the strain on the computer aid overloads it, requiring extensive repair work before it can be used again. Kirk believes within six years, Keeler will become nationally famous, but Spock believes their caretaker will die ''this'' year. Spock tells Kirk of the conflicting news reports and that Edith Keeler is the focal point in time that both they and Dr. McCoy will be drawn to. Kirk ponders what the correct course of history is, if she lives or dies and what role McCoy, especially in his cordrazine-induced condition will play in it - he might kill her himself or prevent her death.
McCoy arrives approximately one week after Kirk and Spock. His face is mottled and green from the cordrazine. He meets a [[Unnamed Humans (20th century)#Rodent|homeless man]] who frequents the 21st Street Mission and questions him about their location, time, planet, and constellations. His shock at the unfamiliar world, combined with the side effects of the drug, forces McCoy into unconsciousness. The homeless man searches McCoy and finds his [[phaser]]. While tinkering with it, he accidentally overloads it and vaporizes himself.
 
   
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Spock asks Kirk the most pressing question of all, suppose that they discover to set history right, Edith Keeler must die? Kirk cannot answer and he wrestles with his growing affection for her and the role she will ultimately play in history.
After regaining consciousness, McCoy finds some of the effects of the cordrazine have worn off and he makes his way to the shelter, where Keeler helps him into a room where he can rest. Spock narrowly misses seeing him in the lunch room.
 
   
 
===Act Three===
With more work, Spock concludes that McCoy changed history by saving Keeler's life. Keeler went on to organize a peace movement that delayed the United States' entry into [[World War II]] – and [[Germany]] was able to complete its heavy water and rocket experiments. With [[atomic bomb]]s, and rockets to carry them, the [[Nazi]]s conquered the world.
 
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[[File:Spilled milk.jpg|thumb|left|"''Don't run! I won't kill you!!''"]]
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In a back alley elsewhere in the city, Dr. McCoy arrives from the future, screaming out to the "assassins" and the "murderers", garnering the attention of a homeless man, awestruck with fear. He runs, but McCoy pursues him, promising he won't kill him. He eventually catches up to him, but, McCoy soon wonders where he is. The [[constellations]] in the sky lead him to believe that he's on Earth, but, even in his manic-state, he believes it's some kind of trick. He begins sobbing hysterically at how [[hospital]]s in the past needed to use [[needle]]s and [[suture]]s to attend to people and loses consciousness. The derelict picks McCoy's pocket and takes his phaser. Unfortunately, as he examines it, he activates the overload circuit and vaporizes himself.
   
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The next morning, McCoy looks in terrible shape. As he staggers around the streets, coming out of his cordrazine overdose, he discovers the 21st Street Mission. He goes inside where Edith is serving [[coffee]]. She notices his condition and takes him to a cot in the backroom where he won't be disturbed. As they depart, Spock takes over for her pouring the coffee, missing McCoy. Shortly thereafter, Spock is able to repair the computer aid and accesses the tricorder again.
Kirk admits that he is in love with Edith Keeler. Spock informs him, "''Edith Keeler must die.''"
 
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[[File:Nazis guardian of forever 2.jpg|right|thumb|"''All this because McCoy came back...''"]]
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According the the scans taken from the [[time vortex]], McCoy kept Keeler from dying in a traffic accident as she was meant to. She later went on to found a pacifist movement who's influence on President Roosevelt delayed the [[United States]]' entry into [[World War II]]. As the peace negotiations dragged on, [[Adolf Hitler]] and [[Nazi Germany]] had time to complete their [[heavy water]] experiments, allowing them to develop the [[atomic bomb]] first, whereby Germany conquered the world. Spock tells Kirk they must stop McCoy. Kirk wonders when she has to die, but, Spock informs him that while they can extrapolate general events, they cannot pinpoint exact movements at exact time. Kirk, his heart already breaking, tells Spock that he believes he is in love with Edith Keeler. Spock grimly reminds the captain that Edith Keeler ''must'' die.
   
 
===Act Four===
 
===Act Four===
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McCoy regains consciousness with Keeler at his bedside. While it appears to him that he's back on Earth around 1920 or '25, he dismisses it as part of the cordrazine overdose. He declares that he is the [[chief medical officer]] aboard the USS ''Enterprise.'' However, Keeler, believing him to be speaking of a naval vessel, tells him that he's hardly wearing a navy uniform and dismisses his claim as part of his deteriorated condition. McCoy falls back asleep as Keeler exits.
The effects of McCoy's cordrazine overdose finally wear off, giving him the strength to offer to help at the shelter. Keeler says her "young man" is taking her to a [[Clark Gable]] movie. McCoy surprises Keeler by not knowing who Clark Gable is. While preparing for the Clark Gable movie, Kirk stops Keeler from falling down the stairs as Spock watches. He warns his captain that if he saves her, "millions will die who did not die before."
 
   
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Later, at their apartment building, Kirk approaches Keeler on the staircase. As she goes to meet him, she stumbles. Kirk, reflexively, catches her before she can fall. Spock witnesses this and after Kirk and Keeler part for the moment, Spock reminds him that she might have died had Kirk not caught her. The captain, his voice vacant, dismisses it by saying "''It's not yet time.''" Spock, however, logically states that they are not very certain of their facts and cannot know for sure when the right time will come. He reminds Kirk that if he saves her life, "''Millions will die who did not die before.''"
That evening, Kirk and Keeler are strolling along on their date. As they prepare to cross a street, Keeler mentions the Clark Gable movie. Kirk does not know who Clark Gable is either. When Keeler mentions McCoy's similar response, Kirk finally realizes that McCoy is nearby. He tells Keeler to stay put and heads back to the shelter, yelling for Spock. As he approaches the curb, McCoy exits the front door. Kirk and McCoy embrace in joy and relief.
 
   
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In the evening hours, McCoy is restored to health thanks to Keeler's ministrations. As he drinks a cup of coffee, he offers to help out around the mission to thank her for saving his life. Keeler tells him they can discuss it later as she has to leave, her gentleman caller is taking her to see a [[Clark Gable]] [[movie]]. Dr. McCoy is uncertain as to who Clark Gable is, which she finds very strange and bids him good night.
Keeler, confused by the commotion, begins to cross the street. A large truck is heading in her direction. Kirk, Spock, and McCoy see what is about to happen. Kirk instinctively lunges to save Keeler, but Spock reminds him that he mustn't. Kirk restrains McCoy as well. McCoy is incredulous that Kirk has kept him from saving Keeler's life; Spock dolefully adds that the act was intentional. But history is corrected, and the three men return through the portal – only a moment after entering it, from Scott's perspective.
 
   
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Spock exits the mission as Kirk and Keeler do. As they cross the street, Keeler mentions the idea of seeing the Clark Gable movie. Kirk questions who's she's talking about and Keeler makes an offhand comment about how Dr. McCoy had the same reaction. Kirk, immediately, jumps to attention and asks her if she's talking about Leonard McCoy. She confirms that she is and Kirk tells her to wait on the sidewalk for him as he calls out to Spock. They dash back to the mission as Dr. McCoy exits from it. The three embrace in relief at finally being reunited.
The Guardian offers more opportunities to visit the past, but the heartbroken Kirk and the rest of the landing party return to the ''Enterprise''. On the planet's surface, the howling wind is once again the only sound, as the Guardian awaits the next moment in time that it is asked a question.
 
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[[File:Kirk grieves for Edith Keeler.jpg|thumb|left|Kirk's great loss]]
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Keeler, watching from the other side of the street, begins to cross to see what it going on as a large [[truck]] turns the nearby corner and speeds down the street. Kirk notices her approaching and the oncoming truck and moves to warn her, but Spock yells out to him "''No, Jim!''" Kirk instantly remembers what he has to do and watches in horror as he sees the truck bear down on the unsuspecting Edith Keeler. Dr. McCoy, oblivious to what the ramifications are, begins to run out to assist her, but Kirk has no choice but to grab hold of McCoy and stop him. As Kirk and McCoy struggle, the truck slams on its brakes as Keeler crosses in front of it, but it's too late and her death scream is the only sound that fills the air as it runs her down.
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Kirk, his eyes clenched in grief, cannot bear to look as passersby scurry into the street and surround Edith Keeler's lifeless body. McCoy, in horror and anger, turns to Kirk and says "''You deliberately stopped me, Jim! I could have saved her! Do you know what you just did?!''" Kirk shoves McCoy aside as Spock somberly replies "''He knows, doctor... he knows.''" In Kirk, not even the knowledge that history has been restored can soothe the open wound in his heart that is the death of the woman that he loved.
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[[File:Landing party beams up from Guardian planet.jpg|thumb|right|Returning to the ''Enterprise'']]
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Back in the [[23rd century]], Spock and Kirk, back in their Starfleet uniforms, emerge out of the time portal. Scotty, incredulous, asks them what happened as apparently they had just jumped through the portal moments before. From within the time vortex, Dr. McCoy jumps back out, as well. Spock announces "''We were successful.''" The voice of the Guardian of Forever booms as it declares "''Time has resumed its shape. All is as it was before. Many such journeys are possible. Let me be your gateway.''" Uhura is able to contact the ''Enterprise'', where the crew is wondering if the landing party wants to beam back up.
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Even with the wondrous invitation from the Guardian to travel to other times and other places, Kirk's grim and hurt expression speaks volumes as he gives his order.
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"''Let's get the hell out of here.''"
   
==Log Entries==
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==Log entries==
 
*"''Captain's log, supplemental entry. Two drops of cordrazine can save a man's life, a hundred times that amount has just accidentally been pumped into Dr. McCoy's body. In a strange, wild frenzy, he has fled the ship's bridge. All connecting decks have been placed on alert. We have no way of knowing if the madness is permanent or temporary, or in what direction it will drive McCoy.''"
 
*"''Captain's log, supplemental entry. Two drops of cordrazine can save a man's life, a hundred times that amount has just accidentally been pumped into Dr. McCoy's body. In a strange, wild frenzy, he has fled the ship's bridge. All connecting decks have been placed on alert. We have no way of knowing if the madness is permanent or temporary, or in what direction it will drive McCoy.''"
   
 
*"''Captain's log, no [[stardate]]. For us, time does not exist. McCoy, back somewhere in the past, has effected a change in the course of time. All Earth history has been changed. There is no starship ''Enterprise''. We have only one chance. We have asked the Guardian to show us Earth's history again: Spock and I will go back into time ourselves, and attempt to set right whatever it was that McCoy changed.''"
 
*"''Captain's log, no [[stardate]]. For us, time does not exist. McCoy, back somewhere in the past, has effected a change in the course of time. All Earth history has been changed. There is no starship ''Enterprise''. We have only one chance. We have asked the Guardian to show us Earth's history again: Spock and I will go back into time ourselves, and attempt to set right whatever it was that McCoy changed.''"
   
==Memorable Quotes==
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==Memorable quotes==
 
"''Killers! Assassins!''"
 
"''Killers! Assassins!''"
 
: - '''McCoy''', after an accidental injection of cordrazine
 
: - '''McCoy''', after an accidental injection of cordrazine
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"''My friend is obviously Chinese. I see you've noticed the ears. They're actually easy to explain...He caught his head in a mechanical...rice picker.''"
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"''My friend is obviously Chinese. I see you've noticed the ears. They're actually easy to explain... He caught his head in a mechanical... rice picker.''"
 
: - '''Kirk''' to the police officer, explaining Spock's alien appearance
 
: - '''Kirk''' to the police officer, explaining Spock's alien appearance
   
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"''One day soon, man is going to be able to harness incredible energies -- maybe even the atom; energies that could ultimately hurl us to other worlds in some sort of spaceship. And the men that reach out into space will be able to find ways to feed the hungry millions of the world and to cure their diseases. They will be able to find a way to give each man hope and a common future...and those are the days worth living for.''"
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"''One day soon, man is going to be able to harness incredible energies – maybe even the atom; energies that could ultimately hurl us to other worlds in some sort of spaceship. And the men that reach out into space will be able to find ways to feed the hungry millions of the world and to cure their diseases. They will be able to find a way to give each man hope and a common future... and those are the days worth living for.''"
 
: - '''Keeler''', on her vision of man's future
 
: - '''Keeler''', on her vision of man's future
   
   
 
"''We have a flop.''"<br />
 
"''We have a flop.''"<br />
"''We have a what, Captain?''"<br />
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"''We have a what, captain?''"<br />
 
"''A place to sleep.''"<br />
 
"''A place to sleep.''"<br />
 
"''One might have said so in the first place.''"
 
"''One might have said so in the first place.''"
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"''Let me help. A hundred years or so from now, I believe, a famous novelist will write a classic using that theme. He'll recommend those three words even over I love you.''"
 
"''Let me help. A hundred years or so from now, I believe, a famous novelist will write a classic using that theme. He'll recommend those three words even over I love you.''"
 
: - '''Kirk''', to Keeler
 
: - '''Kirk''', to Keeler
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"''Captain, suppose we discover that in order to set things straight again, Edith Keeler must die? ''"
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: - '''Spock''' about Keeler and history
   
   
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"''Time has resumed its shape. All is as it was before.''"
 
"''Time has resumed its shape. All is as it was before.''"
: - '''''Guardian of Forever''''', after Kirk, Spock and McCoy return
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: - '''''Guardian of Forever''''', after Kirk, Spock, and McCoy return
   
   
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: - '''Kirk''', before beaming back to the ''Enterprise''
 
: - '''Kirk''', before beaming back to the ''Enterprise''
   
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==Background Information==
 
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"''I am a surgeon, not a psychiatrist.''"
===Production Timeline===
 
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: -'''McCoy''', to Keeler
* Treatment is assigned, {{d|16|March|1966}}
 
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* Treatment by [[Cordwainer Bird]], {{d|21|March|1966}}
 
 
==Background information==
* Treatment by [[Harlan Ellison]], {{d|13|May|1966}}
 
 
===Production timeline===
* Teleplay by Harlan Ellison, {{d|3|June|1966}}
 
* First draft: {{d|13|June|1966}}
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* Treatment is assigned: {{d|16|March|1966}}
* Revised final draft by Harlan Ellison, {{d|12|August|1966}}
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* Story outline by [[Harlan Ellison]]: {{d|21|March|1966}}
* Second revised final draft: {{d|1|December|1966}}
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* Revised story outline: {{d|1|May|1966}}
* Treatment, {{d|29|December|1966}}
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* Second revised story outline: {{d|13|May|1966}}
* First draft teleplay by [[Steven W. Carabatsos]], {{m|January|1967}}
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* First draft teleplay by Ellison: {{d|3|June|1966}}
* Rewrite draft by [[Gene L. Coon]], {{d|9|January|1967}}
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* Revised first draft teleplay: {{d|13|June|1966}}
* Teleplay by Harlan Ellison, {{d|23|January|1967}}
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* Final draft teleplay: {{d|12|August|1966}}
* Rewrite draft by [[D.C. Fontana]], {{d|23|January|1967}}
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* First draft teleplay by [[Steven W. Carabatsos]]: {{m|October|1966}}
* Rewrite draft by [[Gene Roddenberry]], {{d|27|January|1967}}.
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* Second revised final draft by Ellison: {{d|1|December|1966}}
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* Story outline by [[Gene L. Coon]]: {{d|29|December|1966}}
:''It has been reported that there are two versions of this with one marked as the "Shooting Script" with a cover date of 27 January, but all of the other pages marked as [[30 January]].''
 
* Final draft of rewrite: {{d|1|February|1967}}
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* Rewrite first draft teleplay by Coon: {{d|9|January|1967}}
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* Rewrite second draft teleplay by [[D.C. Fontana]]: {{d|18|January|1967}}
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* Rewrite revised second draft teleplay: {{d|23|January|1967}}
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* Revised teleplay ("Shooting script") by Coon: {{d|27|January|1967}}
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* Additional revisions: {{d|30|January|1967}}
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* Rewrite final draft teleplay by [[Gene Roddenberry]]: {{d|1|February|1967}}
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* Additional revisions by Coon and Roddenberry: {{d|2|February|1967}}, {{d|3|February|1967}}, {{d|8|February|1967}}, {{d|9|February|1967}}
 
* Filmed: {{d|3|February|1967}} &ndash; {{d|14|February|1967}}
 
* Filmed: {{d|3|February|1967}} &ndash; {{d|14|February|1967}}
 
* Score recording: {{d|24|March|1967}}
 
* Score recording: {{d|24|March|1967}}
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* [[Star Trek Fotonovels|''Star Trek'' Fotonovel]] #1: {{y|1977}}
 
* [[Star Trek Fotonovels|''Star Trek'' Fotonovel]] #1: {{y|1977}}
 
* ''[[Yesterday's Son]]'', a novel featuring the Guardian of Forever: {{m|August|1983}}
 
* ''[[Yesterday's Son]]'', a novel featuring the Guardian of Forever: {{m|August|1983}}
* ''[[The City on the Edge of Forever (reference book)|The City on the Edge of Forever]]'' limited edition hardcover: {{m|September|1993}}
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* ''{{dis|The City on the Edge of Forever|reference book}}'' limited edition hardcover: {{m|September|1993}}
 
* ''Entertainment Weekly'' ranks it as the #1 TOS episode: Fall {{y|1994}}
 
* ''Entertainment Weekly'' ranks it as the #1 TOS episode: Fall {{y|1994}}
 
* "Look Back in Anger", an essay by Harlan Ellison, appears in the ''TV Guide'' magazine special "[[Star Trek: Four Generations]]": Spring {{y|1995}}
 
* "Look Back in Anger", an essay by Harlan Ellison, appears in the ''TV Guide'' magazine special "[[Star Trek: Four Generations]]": Spring {{y|1995}}
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===Story===
 
===Story===
 
* The title of this episode refers to both the dead city on the time planet and New York itself, where the timeline will either be restored or disrupted. In Ellison's original script, Kirk, upon first seeing the city sparkling like a jewel on a high mountaintop, reverently says it looks like "a city on the edge of forever". In Ellison's first treatment for this episode, the city they traveled back in time to was Chicago.
 
* The title of this episode refers to both the dead city on the time planet and New York itself, where the timeline will either be restored or disrupted. In Ellison's original script, Kirk, upon first seeing the city sparkling like a jewel on a high mountaintop, reverently says it looks like "a city on the edge of forever". In Ellison's first treatment for this episode, the city they traveled back in time to was Chicago.
* When asked in February 26, 1992 interview whether the makers of this episode consciously intended it to have the contemporaneous anti-Vietnam-war movement as subtext, associate producer [[Robert Justman]] replied, "Of course we did." [http://www.depauw.edu/SFs/backissues/62/franklin62art.htm]
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* When asked in a February 26, 1992 interview whether the makers of this episode consciously intended it to have the contemporaneous anti-Vietnam-war movement as subtext, associate producer [[Robert Justman]] replied, "Of course we did." [http://www.depauw.edu/SFs/backissues/62/franklin62art.htm]
 
* In ''[[The Star Trek Compendium]]'', [[Allan Asherman]] suggests that the name "Keeler" is derived from the "keel" of a ship, the longitudinal element of a vessel that keeps it held together &ndash; much as Keeler herself keeps the time continuum from coming apart. It also could be interpreted as a hybrid of "killer" and "healer"--a reference to her dual role as the focal point of the time flow. In Ellison's first treatment for this episode, Edith's last name was Koestler.
 
* In ''[[The Star Trek Compendium]]'', [[Allan Asherman]] suggests that the name "Keeler" is derived from the "keel" of a ship, the longitudinal element of a vessel that keeps it held together &ndash; much as Keeler herself keeps the time continuum from coming apart. It also could be interpreted as a hybrid of "killer" and "healer"--a reference to her dual role as the focal point of the time flow. In Ellison's first treatment for this episode, Edith's last name was Koestler.
* Ellison's original story outline and first draft script did not feature Dr. McCoy, but an ''Enterprise'' crewman named Beckwith, who was dealing drugs among the crew. Beckwith murdered a fellow crewman who was on the verge of turning him in, escaped to the planet the ship was orbiting, and went through the Time Vortex, operated by a mysterious ancient race called "The Guardians" and changed history. The ''Enterprise'' was gone, and a savage pirate ship called the ''Condor'' was in its place, full of renegade humans. Kirk and Spock follow Beckwith through the time portal to 1930 New York City, where Kirk falls in love with young social worker Edith Keeler (Koestler in the story outline). Finally, with the help of a legless [[World War I]] veteran called Trooper (who dies during the episode's action), they find Beckwith. In the end, Kirk does ''not'' stop him saving Edith: he freezes at the crucial moment and Spock prevents her rescue. In a brief epilogue, Spock visits Kirk in his quarters and attempts to console him, saying that "No other woman was offered the universe for love." (''[[The Star Trek Compendium]]''), [http://www.fastcopyinc.com/orionpress/articles/city.htm]
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* Ellison's original story outline and first draft script did not feature Dr. McCoy, but an ''Enterprise'' crewman named Beckwith, who was dealing drugs among the crew. Beckwith murdered a fellow crewman named LeBeque, who was on the verge of turning him in, escaped to the planet the ship was orbiting, and went through the Time Vortex, operated by a mysterious ancient race called "The Guardians" and changed history. The ''Enterprise'' was gone, and a savage pirate ship called the ''Condor'' was in its place, full of renegade humans. Kirk and Spock follow Beckwith through the time portal to 1930 New York City, where Kirk falls in love with young social worker Edith Keeler (Koestler in the story outline). Finally, with the help of a legless [[World War I]] veteran called Trooper (who dies during the episode's action), they find Beckwith. In the end, Kirk does ''not'' stop him saving Edith: he freezes at the crucial moment and Spock prevents her rescue. In a brief epilogue, Spock visits Kirk in his quarters and attempts to console him, saying that "No other woman was offered the universe for love." (''[[The Star Trek Compendium]]''), [http://www.fastcopyinc.com/orionpress/articles/city.htm]
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* In Ellison's very first story outline, Beckwith was sentenced to death after he murdered LeBeque, and Kirk ordered his execution to take place on the next deserted planet the ''Enterprise'' comes across. Hence, they beam down with Beckwith and a firing squad to the Guardian Planet. This was very soon eliminated from the story. (''[[These Are the Voyages: TOS Season One]]''). In the revised script by Ellison, Beckwith escapes from Spock and jumps into the Time Vortex again; however he ends up trapped in a super nova time loop which kills him over and over again.
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* Ellison also wrote scenes in which the regular characters acted very much unlike their usual behavior. For example, Kirk and Spock got into a heavy argument when Spock, witnessing a street speaker calling out against foreign immigrants, called the human race barbaric. Kirk then claims he should've just left Spock to be lynched by the mob. (''[[These Are the Voyages: TOS Season One]]'')
 
* Ellison's script was unusable for the series for many different reasons. [[Gene Roddenberry]] objected to the idea that drug usage would still be a problem in the [[23rd century]], and even present among starship crews. Also, the production staff was heavily against Kirk's final inactivity. It seemed that being unable to decide and act, viewers could never be able to accept him as the strong leader figure in later episodes. Elements, such as the Guardians and the ''Condor'' and its crew were simply impossible to create on the series' budget. (''[[The Star Trek Compendium]]''), [http://www.fastcopyinc.com/orionpress/articles/city.htm]
 
* Ellison's script was unusable for the series for many different reasons. [[Gene Roddenberry]] objected to the idea that drug usage would still be a problem in the [[23rd century]], and even present among starship crews. Also, the production staff was heavily against Kirk's final inactivity. It seemed that being unable to decide and act, viewers could never be able to accept him as the strong leader figure in later episodes. Elements, such as the Guardians and the ''Condor'' and its crew were simply impossible to create on the series' budget. (''[[The Star Trek Compendium]]''), [http://www.fastcopyinc.com/orionpress/articles/city.htm]
 
* Originally then-story editor [[Steven W. Carabatsos]] got the job to rewrite Ellison's script, but his draft was not used. Instead, Ellison agreed to make a rewrite himself, which was again deemed unsuitable. Producer [[Gene L. Coon]] also got himself into the rewriting. Finally, the new story editor, [[D.C. Fontana]] got the assignment to rewrite Ellison's script and make it suitable for the series. Fontana's draft was then slightly rewritten by Roddenberry to become the final shooting draft. Much of the finished episode is the product of Fontana, who went uncredited (as did all the other writers) for her contribution. Only two lines from Ellison's original teleplay survive in the final episode, both spoken by the Guardian: "''Since before your sun burned hot in space, since before your race was born,''" and "''Time has resumed its shape.''" (''[[Inside Star Trek: The Real Story]]'')
 
* Originally then-story editor [[Steven W. Carabatsos]] got the job to rewrite Ellison's script, but his draft was not used. Instead, Ellison agreed to make a rewrite himself, which was again deemed unsuitable. Producer [[Gene L. Coon]] also got himself into the rewriting. Finally, the new story editor, [[D.C. Fontana]] got the assignment to rewrite Ellison's script and make it suitable for the series. Fontana's draft was then slightly rewritten by Roddenberry to become the final shooting draft. Much of the finished episode is the product of Fontana, who went uncredited (as did all the other writers) for her contribution. Only two lines from Ellison's original teleplay survive in the final episode, both spoken by the Guardian: "''Since before your sun burned hot in space, since before your race was born,''" and "''Time has resumed its shape.''" (''[[Inside Star Trek: The Real Story]]'')
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* Coon is mainly responsible for the small comical elements of the story, including the famous "rice picker" scene, which Ellison has reportedly hated. (''[[These Are the Voyages: TOS Season One]]'')
 
* Ellison was dismayed with the changes Roddenberry and Fontana made to his story, so much so, that he wished his credit to read "written by Cordwainer Bird", a request Roddenberry denied. Though Ellison had the final right to have his pseudonym attached, he claims that Roddenberry made veiled threats that if he did so he would be "blackballed" in the television and motion picture industry. Despite this feud, Roddenberry would list this as one of his top ten favorite episodes in an issue of ''TV Guide'' celebrating the 25th anniversary of ''Star Trek''. In his own defense, Ellison stated he had no real problem with D.C. Fontana rewriting him, but rather with the extent and number of unpaid rewrites the studio and network got out of him, to say nothing of exaggeration-prone Gene Roddenberry telling fans that Ellison's script showed "Scotty selling drugs" (the script did not feature Scotty at all). (''[[Star Trek: Four Generations]]'')
 
* Ellison was dismayed with the changes Roddenberry and Fontana made to his story, so much so, that he wished his credit to read "written by Cordwainer Bird", a request Roddenberry denied. Though Ellison had the final right to have his pseudonym attached, he claims that Roddenberry made veiled threats that if he did so he would be "blackballed" in the television and motion picture industry. Despite this feud, Roddenberry would list this as one of his top ten favorite episodes in an issue of ''TV Guide'' celebrating the 25th anniversary of ''Star Trek''. In his own defense, Ellison stated he had no real problem with D.C. Fontana rewriting him, but rather with the extent and number of unpaid rewrites the studio and network got out of him, to say nothing of exaggeration-prone Gene Roddenberry telling fans that Ellison's script showed "Scotty selling drugs" (the script did not feature Scotty at all). (''[[Star Trek: Four Generations]]'')
 
* Roddenberry apparently denied Ellison's pseudonym request because he knew everyone in the science fiction community was aware that the "Cordwainer Bird" credit was Ellison's way of signaling his dissatisfaction with the way production people treated what he wrote. It would have meant that ''Star Trek'' was no different than all the other "science fiction" shows in mistreating quality writers, and could have resulted in prose science fiction writers avoiding contributing to the program. (''[[Inside Star Trek: The Real Story]]'')
 
* Roddenberry apparently denied Ellison's pseudonym request because he knew everyone in the science fiction community was aware that the "Cordwainer Bird" credit was Ellison's way of signaling his dissatisfaction with the way production people treated what he wrote. It would have meant that ''Star Trek'' was no different than all the other "science fiction" shows in mistreating quality writers, and could have resulted in prose science fiction writers avoiding contributing to the program. (''[[Inside Star Trek: The Real Story]]'')
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===Production===
 
===Production===
 
* This was the most expensive episode produced during the first season, with a budget of $245,316, and also the most expensive episode of the entire series, except the two pilots. The average cost of a first season episode was around $190,000. Also, production went one and half days over schedule, resulting in eight shooting days instead of the usual six. (''[[Inside Star Trek: The Real Story]]'')
 
* This was the most expensive episode produced during the first season, with a budget of $245,316, and also the most expensive episode of the entire series, except the two pilots. The average cost of a first season episode was around $190,000. Also, production went one and half days over schedule, resulting in eight shooting days instead of the usual six. (''[[Inside Star Trek: The Real Story]]'')
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* [[Joseph Pevney]] was chosen to direct on this episode because of his experience in directing more than twenty feature films. (''[[These Are the Voyages: TOS Season One]]'')
 
* There is a scene in the original 1960s broadcast version that has been partially deleted in some editions. When McCoy meets Rodent holding the milk bottle, the scene ends with McCoy collapsing, then cuts to McCoy meeting Keeler in the Mission. As originally filmed, after McCoy collapses, Rodent picks McCoy's pocket and takes his hand phaser (which he took from the transporter chief) and accidentally sets it on overload, and kills himself. The scene is present in its original form in DVD and laserdisc versions. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:The_City_on_the_Edge_of_Forever#McCoy.27s_phaser] [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:The_City_on_the_Edge_of_Forever#scene_with_bum_dying_cut_everywhere.3F]
 
* There is a scene in the original 1960s broadcast version that has been partially deleted in some editions. When McCoy meets Rodent holding the milk bottle, the scene ends with McCoy collapsing, then cuts to McCoy meeting Keeler in the Mission. As originally filmed, after McCoy collapses, Rodent picks McCoy's pocket and takes his hand phaser (which he took from the transporter chief) and accidentally sets it on overload, and kills himself. The scene is present in its original form in DVD and laserdisc versions. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:The_City_on_the_Edge_of_Forever#McCoy.27s_phaser] [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:The_City_on_the_Edge_of_Forever#scene_with_bum_dying_cut_everywhere.3F]
* The network heavily objected to Kirk's last line, ''"Let's get the hell out of here."'' and wanted it to be removed from the episode.[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ca44g-LnwlI&feature=watch_response] The word "[[Hell]]" was used four times in ''The Original Series'', the other three being {{e|Space Seed}}, when Kirk quotes Milton, "It is better to rule in Hell than serve in Heaven", {{e|The Alternative Factor}}, when [[Lazarus]] tells his counterpart, "I'll chase you into the very fires of hell!" and {{e|The Doomsday Machine}}, when [[Matt Decker|Decker]] describes the berserker as "right out of hell." "City" marks the only time that the word was used as an expletive, rather than a reference to the domicile of the damned.
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* The network heavily objected to Kirk's last line, "''Let's get the hell out of here''" and wanted it to be removed from the episode. [http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ca44g-LnwlI&feature=watch_response] The word "Hell" was used four times in ''The Original Series'', the other three being {{e|Space Seed}}, when Kirk quotes Milton, "''It is better to rule in Hell than serve in Heaven''", {{e|The Alternative Factor}}, when [[Lazarus]] tells his counterpart, "''I'll chase you into the very fires of hell!''", and {{e|The Doomsday Machine}}, when [[Matt Decker|Decker]] describes the berserker as "right out of hell." "City" marks the only time that the word was used as an expletive, rather than a reference to the domicile of the damned.
   
===Sets and Props===
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===Sets and props===
 
* The footage seen through the time portal is, for the most part, lifted from old Paramount films.
 
* The footage seen through the time portal is, for the most part, lifted from old Paramount films.
 
* The set used for New York City in this episode (called [[40 Acres]]) is the same set used for ''{{w|The Andy Griffith Show}}''. While Kirk is walking with Edith Keeler, they pass the courthouse and Floyd's barber shop. The same backlot was used for location shooting in {{e|Miri}} and {{e|The Return of the Archons}}.
 
* The set used for New York City in this episode (called [[40 Acres]]) is the same set used for ''{{w|The Andy Griffith Show}}''. While Kirk is walking with Edith Keeler, they pass the courthouse and Floyd's barber shop. The same backlot was used for location shooting in {{e|Miri}} and {{e|The Return of the Archons}}.
 
* The alley in which Kirk steals the clothing from the fire-escape is the same alley seen in {{e|Miri}}, in which Spock and the guards have debris dumped on them by the children.
 
* The alley in which Kirk steals the clothing from the fire-escape is the same alley seen in {{e|Miri}}, in which Spock and the guards have debris dumped on them by the children.
 
* Director [[Joseph Pevney]] couldn't complete all scenes scheduled to be filmed at 40 Acres on schedule. However, the backlot was already booked for filming by ''The Andy Griffith Show'', so the arrival of McCoy to the past and [[Rodent]]'s death had to be filmed on a studio alleyway behind [[Paramount Stage 32|Desilu Stage 10]]. (''[[These Are the Voyages: TOS Season One]]'')
 
* Director [[Joseph Pevney]] couldn't complete all scenes scheduled to be filmed at 40 Acres on schedule. However, the backlot was already booked for filming by ''The Andy Griffith Show'', so the arrival of McCoy to the past and [[Rodent]]'s death had to be filmed on a studio alleyway behind [[Paramount Stage 32|Desilu Stage 10]]. (''[[These Are the Voyages: TOS Season One]]'')
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* [[Paramount Stage 19|Desilu Stage 11]], usually not a ''Star Trek'' stage, was used for filming the mission interiors. The stage was occupied by ''My Three Sons'' previously, but as that series was moved to another location, it became available for the crew to film. (''[[These Are the Voyages: TOS Season One]]'')
* The shot of the outside of Kirk and Spock's flop, seen after the man kills himself with McCoy's phaser, shows the sign for a fallout shelter on it. There were, however, no nuclear weapons in 1930.
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* The stock footage shot of the outside of Kirk and Spock's flop, seen after the man kills himself with McCoy's phaser, shows the sign for a fallout shelter on it. There were, however, no nuclear weapons in 1930.
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* The Guardian of Forever was designed by Art Director [[Rolland M. Brooks]]. Normally, set design was the purview of his colleague [[Matt Jefferies]], but due to illness, Brooks took over his chores for the Guardian. When Jefferies returned to his duties and saw the donut-shaped set piece for the first time, he reportedly exclaimed, "''What the hell is this?!''", according to Story Editor Fontana. (''[[These Are the Voyages: TOS Season One]]'', 1st ed, p. 517) Special effects artist [[Jim Rugg]] was responsible for the light effects for the Guardian. (''[[Cinefantastique]]'', Vol 17 #2, p. 24)
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* Together with Jefferies, Rugg was also responsible for Spock's computer-aid to access the information in his tricorder for the episode, as Jefferies recalled, "''When a script came out, Roddenberry would say, "I need something that supposedly does such and such...come up with something." So we would work together on the workbench with Jimmy Rugg and see what we could cobble together.''", to which Rugg added, "''We got a bunch of antique vacuum tubes–real '30s types–and added a few blinking lights among them.''" Rugg subsequently oversaw its destruction in the episode. (''[[Cinefantastique]]'', Vol 17 #2, p. 24)
   
 
=== Music ===
 
=== Music ===
* Due to copyright issues, the original Ray Noble recording of ''[[Goodnight, Sweetheart]]'' was replaced during the 1980s by another version for VHS and Laserdisc releases. However, Paramount's 1980 "Television Classics" home video release of this episode retains the original recording. Eventually this was corrected for the DVD release. New music was also composed for this episode, incorporating the song, but the composer of this music is not credited. {{brokenlink|url=http://www.startrek.com/startrek/view/features/specials/article/21683.html}}
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* Due to copyright issues, the original Ray Noble recording of "[[Goodnight, Sweetheart]]" was replaced during the 1980s by another version for VHS and Laserdisc releases. However, Paramount's 1980 "Television Classics" home video release of this episode retains the original recording. Eventually this was corrected for the DVD release. New music was also composed for this episode, incorporating the song, but the composer of this music is not credited. {{brokenlink|url=http://www.startrek.com/startrek/view/features/specials/article/21683.html}}
* According to ''[[The Music of Star Trek]]'', [[Fred Steiner]] takes credit for scoring new music (although sparse - only a few cues) for this episode. Most of the episode was tracked with prior music, including [[Joseph Mullendore]], [[Gerald Fried]] and [[Alexander Courage]]. Also, music from {{e|Shore Leave}} is heavily present, including the score for the police chase, and some humorous cues in certain scenes. Most of the music accompanying the romance of Kirk and Edith Keeler are taken from {{e|The Conscience of the King}}.
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* According to ''[[The Music of Star Trek]]'', [[Fred Steiner]] takes credit for scoring new music (although sparse - only a few cues) for this episode. Most of the episode was tracked with prior music, including [[Joseph Mullendore]], [[Gerald Fried]], and [[Alexander Courage]]. Also, music from {{e|Shore Leave}} is heavily present, including the score for the police chase, and some humorous cues in certain scenes. Most of the music accompanying the romance of Kirk and Edith Keeler are taken from {{e|The Conscience of the King}}.
   
===Special Effects===
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===Special effects===
 
* Stock footage from {{e|Dagger of the Mind}} and {{e|The Naked Time}} is used for Kirk's and Spock's reaction shots to McCoy's cordrazine overdose on the bridge.
 
* Stock footage from {{e|Dagger of the Mind}} and {{e|The Naked Time}} is used for Kirk's and Spock's reaction shots to McCoy's cordrazine overdose on the bridge.
 
* Double-exposures allowed Kirk and Spock to leap out of brick walls in this episode.
 
* Double-exposures allowed Kirk and Spock to leap out of brick walls in this episode.
 
* During the speech scene in the Mission where Kirk and Spock have sat down with their soup, the director repeated (and slowed down) several close-up shots of Spock and Kirk, taken from later in the scene, and used them as reaction shots during Edith's prognostications.
 
* During the speech scene in the Mission where Kirk and Spock have sat down with their soup, the director repeated (and slowed down) several close-up shots of Spock and Kirk, taken from later in the scene, and used them as reaction shots during Edith's prognostications.
* The close up of the tricorder showing the 'rewinding video' is used several other times throughout the series.
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* The close up of the tricorder showing the "rewinding video" is used several other times throughout the series.
   
 
=== Continuity ===
 
=== Continuity ===
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* A comparison of the calendar on the wall behind Kirk and Edith when she calls him and Spock "uncommon workmen" to the real calendar from 1930 shows that this episode was taking place in May, 1930, however the calendar year and date were taped-over and the month also shows only 30 days.
 
* A comparison of the calendar on the wall behind Kirk and Edith when she calls him and Spock "uncommon workmen" to the real calendar from 1930 shows that this episode was taking place in May, 1930, however the calendar year and date were taped-over and the month also shows only 30 days.
 
* [[Clark Gable]], who was by no means a leading man in 1930, was not the original choice of reference. The final shooting draft of this script has Edith reference "a {{w|Richard Dix}} movie", but the crew on the set felt Dix's name wouldn't be familiar to viewers in the 1960s.
 
* [[Clark Gable]], who was by no means a leading man in 1930, was not the original choice of reference. The final shooting draft of this script has Edith reference "a {{w|Richard Dix}} movie", but the crew on the set felt Dix's name wouldn't be familiar to viewers in the 1960s.
* The use of the song ''[[Goodnight, Sweetheart]]'' is a slight anachronism, since the song was first recorded in 1931. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Goodnight,_Sweetheart_%281931_song%29]
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* The use of the song "[[Goodnight, Sweetheart]]" is a slight anachronism, since the song was first recorded in 1931. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Goodnight,_Sweetheart_%281931_song%29]
 
* Edith Keeler tells Kirk "''Let me help''". Kirk replies, "''A hundred years or so from now, a famous novelist will write a classic using that theme. He'll recommend those three words, even over 'I love you'.''" Kirk tells her that the novelist will come from a planet circling the far left star in Orion's belt: Zeta Orionis (or [[Alnitak]]).
 
* Edith Keeler tells Kirk "''Let me help''". Kirk replies, "''A hundred years or so from now, a famous novelist will write a classic using that theme. He'll recommend those three words, even over 'I love you'.''" Kirk tells her that the novelist will come from a planet circling the far left star in Orion's belt: Zeta Orionis (or [[Alnitak]]).
 
* This is the first mention of Nazi Germany in ''Star Trek''. A race which adopted a Nazi-style regime also appears in {{TOS|Patterns of Force}}. The theme is reprised in later shows: on {{VOY|The Killing Game}}, where [[Hirogen]] take over {{USS|Voyager}} and use the [[holodeck]] to recreate Nazi Germany, and then in {{ENT|Zero Hour}}, and {{e|Storm Front}}, when agents from the [[Temporal Cold War]] send Captain [[Jonathan Archer|Archer]] and the {{EnterpriseNX}} back to the Second World War. {{brokenlink|url=http://www.startrek.com/startrek/view/features/specials/article/7574.html}}
 
* This is the first mention of Nazi Germany in ''Star Trek''. A race which adopted a Nazi-style regime also appears in {{TOS|Patterns of Force}}. The theme is reprised in later shows: on {{VOY|The Killing Game}}, where [[Hirogen]] take over {{USS|Voyager}} and use the [[holodeck]] to recreate Nazi Germany, and then in {{ENT|Zero Hour}}, and {{e|Storm Front}}, when agents from the [[Temporal Cold War]] send Captain [[Jonathan Archer|Archer]] and the {{EnterpriseNX}} back to the Second World War. {{brokenlink|url=http://www.startrek.com/startrek/view/features/specials/article/7574.html}}
 
* The portal is revisited in [[Star Trek: The Animated Series|the animated series]] episode {{e|Yesteryear}} and numerous books.
 
* The portal is revisited in [[Star Trek: The Animated Series|the animated series]] episode {{e|Yesteryear}} and numerous books.
 
* In one scene in this episode, a poster can be seen advertising a [[boxing]] event at [[Madison Square Garden]] featuring "[[Kid McCook]]" vs. "[[Mike Mason]]". For the ''[[Star Trek: Deep Space Nine]]'' episode {{e|Past Tense, Part II}}, scenic artists [[Doug Drexler]] and [[Michael Okuda]] created a near replica of this boxing poster for a scene set in 1930 San Francisco; the [[:File:Boxing Poster from Past Tense, Part II.jpg|DS9 poster]] features the same boxers, and says that it is "their first rematch since Madison Square Garden".{{DrexFiles|2009/02/14/shields-up/}}
 
* In one scene in this episode, a poster can be seen advertising a [[boxing]] event at [[Madison Square Garden]] featuring "[[Kid McCook]]" vs. "[[Mike Mason]]". For the ''[[Star Trek: Deep Space Nine]]'' episode {{e|Past Tense, Part II}}, scenic artists [[Doug Drexler]] and [[Michael Okuda]] created a near replica of this boxing poster for a scene set in 1930 San Francisco; the [[:File:Boxing Poster from Past Tense, Part II.jpg|DS9 poster]] features the same boxers, and says that it is "their first rematch since Madison Square Garden".{{DrexFiles|2009/02/14/shields-up/}}
* ''[[Star Trek: Voyager]]'' also made a small tribute to this episode in {{e|Future's End}}, when [[Kathryn Janeway|Janeway]] likenes late-[[20th century]] computer technology to "[[stone knives and bearskins]]".
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* ''[[Star Trek: Voyager]]'' also made a small tribute to this episode in {{e|Future's End}}, when [[Kathryn Janeway|Janeway]] likens late-[[20th century]] computer technology to "[[stone knives and bearskins]]".
   
 
=== Reception ===
 
=== Reception ===
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* This episode was chosen by Eugene W. "Rod" Roddenberry (Son of [[Gene Roddenberry]]) to be his favorite episode. {{brokenlink|url=http://www.startrek.com/startrek/view/news/article/2312483.html}}
 
* This episode was chosen by Eugene W. "Rod" Roddenberry (Son of [[Gene Roddenberry]]) to be his favorite episode. {{brokenlink|url=http://www.startrek.com/startrek/view/news/article/2312483.html}}
 
* The book ''[[Star Trek 101]]'', by [[Terry J. Erdmann]] and [[Paula M. Block]], lists this episode as one of "Ten Essential Episodes" from the original ''Star Trek'' series.
 
* The book ''[[Star Trek 101]]'', by [[Terry J. Erdmann]] and [[Paula M. Block]], lists this episode as one of "Ten Essential Episodes" from the original ''Star Trek'' series.
*TV Guide ranked this episode #80 on their list of the Top 100 Episodes. [http://rev-views.blogspot.com/2009/06/tv-guides-top-100-episodes.html]
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* ''TV Guide'' ranked this episode #80 on their list of the Top 100 Episodes. [http://rev-views.blogspot.com/2009/06/tv-guides-top-100-episodes.html]
   
 
=== Awards ===
 
=== Awards ===
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* This episode is the only ''Star Trek'' episode to win a [[Writers Guild of America Award]]. Ellison took the award home for "Best Written Dramatic Episode", for his original version of the teleplay. On the award ceremony (where Roddenberry, Coon, [[Robert Justman]], [[Herb Solow]] and other ''Star Trek'' production people were present), Ellison loudly spoke out against executives rewriting his and other writers' work in the industry. (''[[Inside Star Trek: The Real Story]]'')
 
* This episode is the only ''Star Trek'' episode to win a [[Writers Guild of America Award]]. Ellison took the award home for "Best Written Dramatic Episode", for his original version of the teleplay. On the award ceremony (where Roddenberry, Coon, [[Robert Justman]], [[Herb Solow]] and other ''Star Trek'' production people were present), Ellison loudly spoke out against executives rewriting his and other writers' work in the industry. (''[[Inside Star Trek: The Real Story]]'')
   
===Novelizations and Adaptations===
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===Novelizations and adaptations===
 
[[File:Star Trek Fotonovel 01.jpg|thumb|Foto-novelization of the episode]]
 
[[File:Star Trek Fotonovel 01.jpg|thumb|Foto-novelization of the episode]]
 
* [[Bantam Books]] published a series of [[novels|novelizations]] called "[[Star Trek Fotonovels|fotonovels]]," which took photographic stills from actual episodes and arranged word balloons and text over them, to create a [[comics|comic book]] formatted story. The first installment was an adaptation of this episode and featured a short interview with Ellison.
 
* [[Bantam Books]] published a series of [[novels|novelizations]] called "[[Star Trek Fotonovels|fotonovels]]," which took photographic stills from actual episodes and arranged word balloons and text over them, to create a [[comics|comic book]] formatted story. The first installment was an adaptation of this episode and featured a short interview with Ellison.
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* A sequel to this story was presented in [[Western Publishing|Gold Key Comics']] [[Gold Key TOS|TOS]] issue #56 "[[No Time Like the Past (comic)|No Time Like the Past]]".
 
* A sequel to this story was presented in [[Western Publishing|Gold Key Comics']] [[Gold Key TOS|TOS]] issue #56 "[[No Time Like the Past (comic)|No Time Like the Past]]".
 
* An episode of ''[[South Park]]'', in which one of the children on a trapped school bus wearing a red commander uniform was killed, was given the same title as this episode.
 
* An episode of ''[[South Park]]'', in which one of the children on a trapped school bus wearing a red commander uniform was killed, was given the same title as this episode.
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* Ellison's original teleplay was adapted by [[IDW Publishing]] for a five-issue comic book series titled ''[[Star Trek: Harlan Ellison's The City on the Edge of Forever| Harlan Ellison's The City on the Edge of Forever]]''.
   
===Remastered Information===
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===Remastered information===
"The City on the Edge of Forever" was the fifth episode of the remastered version of ''The Original Series'' to air. It premiered in syndication on the weekend of {{d|7|October|2006}} and featured new effects shots of the ''Enterprise'' and the [[time vortex planet]] from space, a slightly tweaked pan up from the planet's surface, an enhanced disintegration effect as Rodent accidentally sets off McCoy's phaser, cleaned-up mattes and static effects in the tricorder insert shots, and eliminated the freeze-framing over the end credits.
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"The City on the Edge of Forever" was the fifth episode of the remastered version of ''The Original Series'' to air. It premiered in syndication on the weekend of {{d|7|October|2006}} and featured new effects shots of the ''Enterprise'' and the [[Unnamed Alpha and Beta Quadrant planets#Time planet|time planet]] from space, a slightly tweaked pan up from the planet's surface, an enhanced disintegration effect as Rodent accidentally sets off McCoy's phaser, cleaned-up mattes and static effects in the tricorder insert shots, and eliminated the freeze-framing over the end credits.
   
 
With regards to some of the new updates, Rossi stated, "''For instance, in "City on the Edge of the Forever," there's a line where Captain Kirk says, "'These ruins extend to the distance.'" So we extended that shot into a 16:9 aspect ratio and created all these wonderful ruins.''" {{brokenlink|url=http://www.startrek.com/startrek/view/news/article/31235.html}}
 
With regards to some of the new updates, Rossi stated, "''For instance, in "City on the Edge of the Forever," there's a line where Captain Kirk says, "'These ruins extend to the distance.'" So we extended that shot into a 16:9 aspect ratio and created all these wonderful ruins.''" {{brokenlink|url=http://www.startrek.com/startrek/view/news/article/31235.html}}
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File:time vortex planet.jpg|The original shot of the Guardian's planet
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File:time planet.jpg|The original shot of the Guardian's planet
File:time vortex planet remastered.jpg|...and its CGI counterpart
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File:time planet remastered.jpg|...and its CGI counterpart
 
File:Rodent disintegration, original.jpg|The original disintegration effect
 
File:Rodent disintegration, original.jpg|The original disintegration effect
 
File:Rodent disintegration, remastered.jpg|...and the slightly altered version
 
File:Rodent disintegration, remastered.jpg|...and the slightly altered version
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:''The next remastered episode to air was {{e|I, Mudd}}.''
 
:''The next remastered episode to air was {{e|I, Mudd}}.''
   
===Video and DVD Releases===
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===Video and DVD releases===
* US CED VideoDisc release: {{d|22|March|1981}}.
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* US CED VideoDisc release: {{d|22|March|1981}}
 
* Original US Betamax release: ''{{y|1980}}'' (as Volume 5 of Paramount Home Video's ''Television Classic''s Series with ''[[Balance of Terror]]''
 
* Original US Betamax release: ''{{y|1980}}'' (as Volume 5 of Paramount Home Video's ''Television Classic''s Series with ''[[Balance of Terror]]''
* US LaserDisc release: ''{{m|January|1986}}''.
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* US LaserDisc release: ''{{m|January|1986}}''
 
* US VHS release: ''{{y|1980}}'' (as Volume 5 of Paramount Home Video's ''Television Classics'' Series with ''[[Balance of Terror]]''
 
* US VHS release: ''{{y|1980}}'' (as Volume 5 of Paramount Home Video's ''Television Classics'' Series with ''[[Balance of Terror]]''
* [[Star Trek VHS releases in the UK|UK VHS release]] (two-episode tapes, [[CIC Video]]): [[TOS Season 1 UK VHS|Volume 15]], catalog number VHR 2311, ''release date unknown''.
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* [[Star Trek VHS releases in the UK|UK VHS release]] (two-episode tapes, [[CIC Video]]): [[TOS Season 1 UK VHS|Volume 15]], catalog number VHR 2311, ''release date unknown''
* US VHS release: ''{{y|1986}}'' (Released as part of Paramount's releases of individual episodes.)
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* US VHS release: ''{{y|1986}}'' (released as part of Paramount's releases of individual episodes)
* Japan LaserDisc release: {{d|10|November|1992}}.
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* Japan LaserDisc release: {{d|10|November|1992}}
* US VHS release: {{d|15|April|1994}}.
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* US VHS release: {{d|15|April|1994}}
* As part of the UK VHS ''[[Star Trek: The Original Series - Tricorder Pack]]'' collection: catalog number VHR 4373, {{d|3|June|1996}}.
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* As part of the UK VHS ''[[Star Trek: The Original Series - Tricorder Pack]]'' collection: catalog number VHR 4373, {{d|3|June|1996}}
* UK re-release (three-episode tapes, CIC Video): Volume 1.10, {{d|13|January|1997}}.
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* UK re-release (three-episode tapes, CIC Video): Volume 1.10, {{d|13|January|1997}}
* Original US DVD release (single-disc): Volume 14, {{d|11|July|2000}}.
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* Original US DVD release (single-disc): Volume 14, {{d|11|July|2000}}
 
* As a bonus on the Region 2 release of [[VOY Season 1 DVD]]
 
* As a bonus on the Region 2 release of [[VOY Season 1 DVD]]
* As part of the [[TOS Season 1 DVD]] collection.
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* As part of the [[TOS Season 1 DVD]] collection
* As part of the ''[[Star Trek: Fan Collective - Time Travel]]'' DVD collection.
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* As part of the ''[[Star Trek: Fan Collective - Time Travel]]'' DVD collection
* As William Shatner's episode choice in the ''[[Star Trek: Fan Collective - Captain's Log]]'' DVD collection, featuring an introduction by Shatner and Joan Collins.
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* As William Shatner's episode choice in the ''[[Star Trek: Fan Collective - Captain's Log]]'' DVD collection, featuring an introduction by Shatner and Joan Collins
* As part of the [[TOS Season 1 HD DVD]] collection.
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* As part of the [[TOS Season 1 HD DVD]] collection
* As part of ''[[The Best of Star Trek: The Original Series]]'' DVD collection.
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* As part of ''[[The Best of Star Trek: The Original Series]]'' DVD collection
* As part of the [[TOS Season 1 Blu-ray]] collection.
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* As part of the [[TOS Season 1 Blu-ray]] collection
   
==Links and References==
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===Starring===
 
===Starring===
 
*[[William Shatner]] as Capt. [[James T. Kirk|Kirk]]
 
*[[William Shatner]] as Capt. [[James T. Kirk|Kirk]]
   
===Also Starring===
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===Also starring===
 
*[[Leonard Nimoy]] as Mr. [[Spock]]
 
*[[Leonard Nimoy]] as Mr. [[Spock]]
   
===Guest Star===
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===Guest star===
 
*[[Joan Collins]] as Sister [[Edith Keeler]]
 
*[[Joan Collins]] as Sister [[Edith Keeler]]
   
===Also Starring===
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===Also starring===
 
*[[DeForest Kelley]] as Dr. [[Leonard McCoy|McCoy]]
 
*[[DeForest Kelley]] as Dr. [[Leonard McCoy|McCoy]]
   
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* [[Bartell La Rue]] as the [[Guardian of Forever|Guardian voice]]
 
* [[Bartell La Rue]] as the [[Guardian of Forever|Guardian voice]]
   
===Uncredited Co-Stars===
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===Uncredited co-stars===
 
* [[Frank da Vinci]] as [[Brent]]
 
* [[Frank da Vinci]] as [[Brent]]
 
* [[William Blackburn]] as [[Hadley]]
 
* [[William Blackburn]] as [[Hadley]]
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**[[Unnamed Humans (20th century)#Citizens (1930)|Citizens (1930)]]
 
**[[Unnamed Humans (20th century)#Citizens (1930)|Citizens (1930)]]
   
=== Stunt Doubles ===
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=== Stunt doubles ===
 
* [[Bobby Bass]] as [[stunt double]] for James Doohan
 
* [[Bobby Bass]] as [[stunt double]] for James Doohan
 
* [[Dave Perna]] as stunt double for DeForest Kelley
 
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===References===
 
===References===
[[20th century]]; [[Alnitak]]; [[Will Bailey|Bailey, Will]]; [[Gus Barnes|Barnes, Gus]]; [[Boise]]; "[[Bones]]"; [[City Council]]; [[constellation]]s; [[cordrazine]]; [[duodynetic field core]]; [[Earth]]; [[Fischer's Infants Wear]]; [[flop]]; [[Floyd's Barber Shop]]; [[Clark Gable|Gable, Clark]]; [[Germany]]; [[gold]]; [[Great Depression]]; [[Guardian of Forever]]; [[Adolf Hitler|Hitler, Adolf]]; [[Killer Kidd|Kidd, Killer]]; [[Gus Lloyd|Lloyd, Gus]]; [[logic]]; [[Madison Square Garden]]; [[March Bake Shop]]; [[Mike Mason|Mason, Mike]]; [[Ricky Mason|Mason, Ricky]]; [[Kid McCook|McCook, Kid]]; [[missionary]]; [[mechanical rice picker]]; [[mnemonic memory circuit]]; [[Charley Mulaney|Mulaney, Charley]]; [[needle]]; [[Orpheum]]; [[Outer Mongolia]]; [[platinum]]; [[Manuel Prado|Prado, Manuel]]; [[San Diego]]; [[Buddy Sencio|Sencio, Buddy]]; [[silver]]; [[Singer's Book Store]]; [[suture]]; ''[[The Star Dispatch|Star Dispatch, The]]''; [[stone knives and bearskins]]; [[Thailand]]; [[time vortex planet]]; [[tricorder]]; [[Twenty-First Street Mission]]; [[Unnamed Alpha and Beta Quadrant planets#Planet in the Alnitak system|unnamed planet]]; [[Victor Ice Company]]; [[Vulcan neck pinch]]; [[Walt's Restaurant]]; [[Widin Dairy Farm]]; [[World War II]]; [[zinc]]
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[[20th century]]; [[Alnitak]]; [[atomic bomb]]; [[Will Bailey|Bailey, Will]]; [[Gus Barnes|Barnes, Gus]]; [[Boise]]; "[[Bones]]"; [[Brooklyn Bridge]]; [[cent]]; [[City Council]]; [[constellation]]s; [[cordrazine]]; [[duodynetic field core]]; [[Earth]]; [[Fischer's Infants Wear]]; [[flop]]; [[Floyd's Barber Shop]]; [[Clark Gable|Gable, Clark]]; [[Germany]]; [[gold]]; "''[[Goodnight Sweetheart]]''; [[Great Depression]]; [[Great Pyramid]]; [[Guardian of Forever]]; [[Hebrew language]]; [[Adolf Hitler|Hitler, Adolf]]; [[Killer Kidd|Kidd, Killer]]; [[Gus Lloyd|Lloyd, Gus]]; [[logic]]; [[Madison Square Garden]]; [[March Bake Shop]]; [[Mike Mason|Mason, Mike]]; [[Ricky Mason|Mason, Ricky]]; [[Kid McCook|McCook, Kid]]; [[missionary]]; [[mechanical rice picker]]; [[mnemonic memory circuit]]; [[Charley Mulaney|Mulaney, Charley]]; [[needle]]; {{dis|Orion|constellation}}; [[Orpheum]]; [[Outer Mongolia]]; [[platinum]]; [[Manuel Prado|Prado, Manuel]]; [[Radio Corporation of America]]; [[Radiola 20]]; [[San Diego]]; [[Buddy Sencio|Sencio, Buddy]]; [[silver]]; [[Singer's Book Store]]; [[suture]]; ''[[The Star Dispatch|Star Dispatch, The]]''; [[stone knives and bearskins]]; [[Thailand]]; [[Unnamed Alpha and Beta Quadrant planets#Time planet|time planet]]; [[tobacco]]; [[tricorder]]; [[Twenty-First Street Mission]]; [[Unnamed Alpha and Beta Quadrant planets#Planet in the Alnitak system|unnamed planet]]; [[V-2 rocket]]; [[Vanguard Insurance Company]]; [[Victor Ice Company]]; [[Vulcan neck pinch]]; [[Walt's Restaurant]]; [[Widin Dairy Farm]]; [[wood alcohol]]; [[World War II]]; [[zinc]]
   
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====Other references====
[[Bangkok]]; [[Bobby Cabe|Cabe, Bobby]]; [[Alfredo Pedillo Jose|Jose, Alfredo Pedillo]]; [[Jean Labeau|Labeau, Jean]]; [[Lee's Summit]]; [[Missouri]]; [[Paris]]; [[Thailand]]; [[United States dollar]]
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[[Bangkok]]; [[Bobby Cabe|Cabe, Bobby]]; [[Alfredo Pedillo Jose|Jose, Alfredo Pedillo]]; [[Jean Labeau|Labeau, Jean]]; [[Lee's Summit]]; [[Missouri]]; [[Paris]]; [[The South]]; [[United States dollar]]; [[Washington, DC]]
   
 
*Harlan Ellison; ''The City on the Edge of Forever''; White Wolf Publishing; ISBN 1565049640 (1st edition, hardcover, 1996)
 
*Harlan Ellison; ''The City on the Edge of Forever''; White Wolf Publishing; ISBN 1565049640 (1st edition, hardcover, 1996)
   
 
===External links===
 
===External links===
* {{NCwiki|The City on the Edge of Forever}}
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* {{NCwiki|The City on the Edge of Forever|"The City on the Edge of Forever"}}
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* {{wikipedia-quote|The City on the Edge of Forever}}
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* [http://www.fastcopyinc.com/orionpress/articles/city.htm Detailed Synopsis of Ellison's First Draft]
 
* [http://www.fastcopyinc.com/orionpress/articles/city.htm Detailed Synopsis of Ellison's First Draft]
   
 
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After taking an accidental overdose of cordrazine, Doctor Leonard McCoy goes back in time and changes history.

Summary

Teaser

Sulu after cordrazine treatment

Sulu is revived by two drops of cordrazine

In orbit around an unexplored planet, the USS Enterprise is on red alert as it passes through violent time distortions surrounding the planet. As the ship plots their orbit, Scotty warns that the control circuits are threatening to overload. No sooner does Captain Kirk acknowledge the report, than the center console on the bridge explodes and Lieutenant Sulu is injured. Scotty takes the helm as Doctor McCoy is called to the bridge for emergency first aid. Scotty questions if the ship should break orbit, but Mr. Spock advises against it - the ship is literally passing through ripples in time and it is of great scientific importance that they remain and investigate. Kirk agrees and orders Uhura to broadcast to Starfleet Command his past week's log entries, detailing the unusual readings on the instruments that has diverted the Enterprise to this planet. McCoy arrives and diagnoses Sulu with a heart flutter. He prepares a hypo of cordrazine, warned by Kirk that it is "tricky stuff." Fortunately, the two drops administered by McCoy successfully revives Sulu.

McCoy experiencing cordrazine frenzy

McCoy, suffering from a cordrazine overdose

Scotty reports that the Enterprise is nearly clear of the time ripples, which Spock confirms, with one heavy displacement directly ahead. The Enterprise shudders violently as it collides with it, causing Dr. McCoy to slip on the helm console and inject the loaded hypospray into his abdomen, emptying its contents into his bloodstream. Kirk and Spock rush to his aid, but McCoy darts up in a panic. Raving and screaming about "killers" and "assassins", McCoy breaks free from the concerned bridge crew and flees the bridge via the turbolift. Kirk orders a security alert.

Act One

"Captain's log, supplemental entry. Two drops of cordrazine can save a man's life. A hundred times that amount has just accidentally been pumped into Dr. McCoy's body. In his strange and wild frenzy, he has fled the ship's bridge. All connecting decks have been placed on alert. We have no way of knowing if the madness is permanent or temporary or what direction it will drive McCoy."

Dr. McCoy evades the security teams and enters the transporter room where he attacks Lieutenant Kyle, steals his phaser and energizes the transporter.

On the bridge, Kirk has returned from sickbay, where the ship's medical department in uncertain of what McCoy's condition will do to him. Spock, having consulted the library computer, discovers that patients exposed to such a level of cordrazine would fail to recognize acquaintances and become hysterically convinced they were in mortal danger, becoming extremely dangerous to himself or anyone else nearby. Suddenly, the transporter room calls the bridge and informs Kirk that McCoy has beamed down to the planet, with the transporter at the time being focused on the center of the time disruptions on the surface. Kirk orders a landing party set up to retrieve Dr. McCoy.

Crew observes the american revolution

"I am the Guardian of Forever."

Kirk, Spock, Scotty, Uhura, and a security detail transport down and discover a ruined city with an unusual looking portal in the midst. As Uhura and Scott's teams search for Dr. McCoy, Kirk and Spock investigate the object. Spock reports that it is the center of all the time disruptions, although he cannot explain how it is possible. The object, though it appears inert, is in fact generating powerful enough waves of displacement that the Enterprise could detect millions of miles away. Kirk asks what it is and a loud, booming voice intones from the object "A question! Since before your sun burned hot in space and before your race was born, I have awaited a question." The object identifies itself as the Guardian of Forever, explaining that is both machine and being, while also being neither. Spock deduces that the Guardian is a time portal - a gateway to other times and dimensions, to which the Guardian confirms is correct and activates its portal, offering Kirk and Spock a gateway into Earth's past.

Suddenly, Dr. McCoy cries out - he has been cornered by the search parties. Still madly convinced they are killers and assassins, he tries to escape, but is subdued by a Vulcan nerve pinch, courtesy of Spock. Kirk ponders if they could use the Guardian of Forever to take Dr. McCoy backwards a day in time to make certain that his accident never happens. However, the portal's speed is moving fairly quickly, jumping from century to century. Spock suddenly realizes that his tricorder is capable of recording images at the same speed and activates it, just as Dr. McCoy regains consciousness. As the landing party is transfixed on the Guardian, they do not see him jump up and run towards the portal until it is too late. McCoy jumps through it and the portal shuts down. When Kirk wonders where he went, the voice of the Guardian explains "He has passed into... what was..."

Uhura suddenly discovers that she's lost contact with the Enterprise. Scotty finds nothing wrong with the communicators, but the Guardian further explains that "Your vessel, your beginning, all that you knew is gone." Kirk makes the horrible realization that Dr. McCoy has somehow changed history, stranding the landing party on the planet with no past and no future. Uhura tells Kirk she's frightened, but, Kirk is equally as disturbed.

"Earth's not there... at least, not the Earth we know. We're totally alone."

Act Two

Time planet remastered

The Guardian's planet

"Captain's log, no stardate. For us, time does not exist. McCoy, back somewhere in the past, has effected a change in the course of time. All Earth history has been changed. There is no Starship Enterprise. We have only one chance - we have asked the Guardian to show us Earth's history again, Spock and I will go back into time ourselves and attempt to set right whatever it was that McCoy changed."

The tricorder scans Spock took just as McCoy left reveal that he jumped back to the early 20th century and can approximate when they should jump through the portal, putting them possibly a month or a week prior to McCoy's arrival. Kirk wonders how they will return to the their own time, but the Guardian tells him that if he is successful in mending the timeline, they will all be returned, as if none of them had gone. Scotty and Uhura are skeptical about their chances, but Spock logically states that there is no alternative. Kirk, however, out of concern for his officers, tells each of the landing party to jump through the portal if they feel like they've waited long enough for he and Spock to return, allowing them to live in Earth's past rather than be stranded on the Guardian's planet should they fail to find the time date McCoy jumped to. Scotty and Uhura bid them good luck as Kirk and Spock jump backwards through time.

Kirk-Spock in 1930

"We seem to be costumed a little out of step with the time."

They arrive in New York City, circa 1930. Kirk recognizes the period from old photographs, which Spock clarifies that an economic upheaval had occurred at this point in time. As passersby scrutinize Kirk and Spock's unusual appearance, they make for a back alley to get out of sight. Kirk notices some contemporary clothes on a fire escape and elects to steal them, as their Starfleet uniforms are not suited for the time period. However, they are apprehended by a police officer. As Kirk woefully tries to explain Spock's Vulcan ears, the policeman prepares to arrest them. However, Spock disables him with a nerve pinch and they escape to the basement of the 21st Street Mission.

Kirk and Spock sweeping the floor

Kirk and Spock find jobs at the 21st Street Mission

After changing clothes, Spock laments that locked in his tricorder are the images of how McCoy will change history. Unfortunately, he would need to tie it into the Enterprise computer to access the information. Kirk wonders if he could build a computer aid using contemporary materials, but, Spock is dubious as to its success. As their voices carry, they are accosted by the proprietor of the mission, Edith Keeler. Kirk apologizes for their intrusion and tells her the truth as to why they came down there - that they had stolen their clothes because they had no money and were being chased by a policeman. Believing them to be victims of the poor economy, Edith offers them jobs at the mission doing chores at fifteen cents an hour for ten hours a day. Kirk and Spock agree and set to cleaning up the basement.

Hours later, they are eating their complementary dinner of soup and bread with the other poverty-stricken citizens, when Keeler takes the stage and gives a motivational speech about how she believes the days ahead are worth living for, theorizing that one day soon, man will be able to harness the power of the atom, which could ultimately propel them into outer space, where they will be able to find ways to feed the hungry millions of the world, to cure their diseases and give mankind hope and a common future. Kirk is impressed with her foresight into the future, while Spock believes it to be merely intuition. Afterwards, Keeler compliments Kirk on his and Spock's work in the basement and offers them further work and sets them up with an apartment in the building she lives in.

Edith Keeler and Jim Kirk

Goodnight, sweetheart.

Several days later, Spock is hard at work attempting to build the computer aid to access the information in his tricorder, but he laments the speed at which the work is progressing as the technology of the 20th century is barely adequate. The next day, Spock observes a man using tools for finely detailed work and steals them from the mission's toolbox. Keeler is very upset that Spock did it, but Kirk is able to convince her that Spock meant no ill will. Edith agrees, as she has become fascinated by Kirk, and asks him to walk her home. The two become close as Keeler questions where Kirk comes from and how he sees the world the same way that she does.

The Star Dispatch

"The President and Edith Keeler conferred for some time today..."

After a few more days, Spock is finally able to access the information in the tricorder, where he discovers Keeler's 1930 obituary - her death the result of a traffic accident. As Kirk enters, he attempts to replay it for him, but another images appears - a newspaper article from six years later, detailing a meeting Keeler has with Franklin D. Roosevelt. Unfortunately, the strain on the computer aid overloads it, requiring extensive repair work before it can be used again. Kirk believes within six years, Keeler will become nationally famous, but Spock believes their caretaker will die this year. Spock tells Kirk of the conflicting news reports and that Edith Keeler is the focal point in time that both they and Dr. McCoy will be drawn to. Kirk ponders what the correct course of history is, if she lives or dies and what role McCoy, especially in his cordrazine-induced condition will play in it - he might kill her himself or prevent her death.

Spock asks Kirk the most pressing question of all, suppose that they discover to set history right, Edith Keeler must die? Kirk cannot answer and he wrestles with his growing affection for her and the role she will ultimately play in history.

Act Three

Spilled milk

"Don't run! I won't kill you!!"

In a back alley elsewhere in the city, Dr. McCoy arrives from the future, screaming out to the "assassins" and the "murderers", garnering the attention of a homeless man, awestruck with fear. He runs, but McCoy pursues him, promising he won't kill him. He eventually catches up to him, but, McCoy soon wonders where he is. The constellations in the sky lead him to believe that he's on Earth, but, even in his manic-state, he believes it's some kind of trick. He begins sobbing hysterically at how hospitals in the past needed to use needles and sutures to attend to people and loses consciousness. The derelict picks McCoy's pocket and takes his phaser. Unfortunately, as he examines it, he activates the overload circuit and vaporizes himself.

The next morning, McCoy looks in terrible shape. As he staggers around the streets, coming out of his cordrazine overdose, he discovers the 21st Street Mission. He goes inside where Edith is serving coffee. She notices his condition and takes him to a cot in the backroom where he won't be disturbed. As they depart, Spock takes over for her pouring the coffee, missing McCoy. Shortly thereafter, Spock is able to repair the computer aid and accesses the tricorder again.

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"All this because McCoy came back..."

According the the scans taken from the time vortex, McCoy kept Keeler from dying in a traffic accident as she was meant to. She later went on to found a pacifist movement who's influence on President Roosevelt delayed the United States' entry into World War II. As the peace negotiations dragged on, Adolf Hitler and Nazi Germany had time to complete their heavy water experiments, allowing them to develop the atomic bomb first, whereby Germany conquered the world. Spock tells Kirk they must stop McCoy. Kirk wonders when she has to die, but, Spock informs him that while they can extrapolate general events, they cannot pinpoint exact movements at exact time. Kirk, his heart already breaking, tells Spock that he believes he is in love with Edith Keeler. Spock grimly reminds the captain that Edith Keeler must die.

Act Four

McCoy regains consciousness with Keeler at his bedside. While it appears to him that he's back on Earth around 1920 or '25, he dismisses it as part of the cordrazine overdose. He declares that he is the chief medical officer aboard the USS Enterprise. However, Keeler, believing him to be speaking of a naval vessel, tells him that he's hardly wearing a navy uniform and dismisses his claim as part of his deteriorated condition. McCoy falls back asleep as Keeler exits.

Later, at their apartment building, Kirk approaches Keeler on the staircase. As she goes to meet him, she stumbles. Kirk, reflexively, catches her before she can fall. Spock witnesses this and after Kirk and Keeler part for the moment, Spock reminds him that she might have died had Kirk not caught her. The captain, his voice vacant, dismisses it by saying "It's not yet time." Spock, however, logically states that they are not very certain of their facts and cannot know for sure when the right time will come. He reminds Kirk that if he saves her life, "Millions will die who did not die before."

In the evening hours, McCoy is restored to health thanks to Keeler's ministrations. As he drinks a cup of coffee, he offers to help out around the mission to thank her for saving his life. Keeler tells him they can discuss it later as she has to leave, her gentleman caller is taking her to see a Clark Gable movie. Dr. McCoy is uncertain as to who Clark Gable is, which she finds very strange and bids him good night.

Spock exits the mission as Kirk and Keeler do. As they cross the street, Keeler mentions the idea of seeing the Clark Gable movie. Kirk questions who's she's talking about and Keeler makes an offhand comment about how Dr. McCoy had the same reaction. Kirk, immediately, jumps to attention and asks her if she's talking about Leonard McCoy. She confirms that she is and Kirk tells her to wait on the sidewalk for him as he calls out to Spock. They dash back to the mission as Dr. McCoy exits from it. The three embrace in relief at finally being reunited.

Kirk grieves for Edith Keeler

Kirk's great loss

Keeler, watching from the other side of the street, begins to cross to see what it going on as a large truck turns the nearby corner and speeds down the street. Kirk notices her approaching and the oncoming truck and moves to warn her, but Spock yells out to him "No, Jim!" Kirk instantly remembers what he has to do and watches in horror as he sees the truck bear down on the unsuspecting Edith Keeler. Dr. McCoy, oblivious to what the ramifications are, begins to run out to assist her, but Kirk has no choice but to grab hold of McCoy and stop him. As Kirk and McCoy struggle, the truck slams on its brakes as Keeler crosses in front of it, but it's too late and her death scream is the only sound that fills the air as it runs her down.

Kirk, his eyes clenched in grief, cannot bear to look as passersby scurry into the street and surround Edith Keeler's lifeless body. McCoy, in horror and anger, turns to Kirk and says "You deliberately stopped me, Jim! I could have saved her! Do you know what you just did?!" Kirk shoves McCoy aside as Spock somberly replies "He knows, doctor... he knows." In Kirk, not even the knowledge that history has been restored can soothe the open wound in his heart that is the death of the woman that he loved.

Landing party beams up from Guardian planet

Returning to the Enterprise

Back in the 23rd century, Spock and Kirk, back in their Starfleet uniforms, emerge out of the time portal. Scotty, incredulous, asks them what happened as apparently they had just jumped through the portal moments before. From within the time vortex, Dr. McCoy jumps back out, as well. Spock announces "We were successful." The voice of the Guardian of Forever booms as it declares "Time has resumed its shape. All is as it was before. Many such journeys are possible. Let me be your gateway." Uhura is able to contact the Enterprise, where the crew is wondering if the landing party wants to beam back up.

Even with the wondrous invitation from the Guardian to travel to other times and other places, Kirk's grim and hurt expression speaks volumes as he gives his order.

"Let's get the hell out of here."

Log entries

  • "Captain's log, supplemental entry. Two drops of cordrazine can save a man's life, a hundred times that amount has just accidentally been pumped into Dr. McCoy's body. In a strange, wild frenzy, he has fled the ship's bridge. All connecting decks have been placed on alert. We have no way of knowing if the madness is permanent or temporary, or in what direction it will drive McCoy."
  • "Captain's log, no stardate. For us, time does not exist. McCoy, back somewhere in the past, has effected a change in the course of time. All Earth history has been changed. There is no starship Enterprise. We have only one chance. We have asked the Guardian to show us Earth's history again: Spock and I will go back into time ourselves, and attempt to set right whatever it was that McCoy changed."

Memorable quotes

"Killers! Assassins!"

- McCoy, after an accidental injection of cordrazine


"Since before your sun burned hot in space and before your race was born, I have awaited a question."

- Guardian of Forever, to Kirk


"Are you machine or being?"
"I am both and neither. I am my own beginning. My own ending."

- Kirk and the Guardian of Forever


"All that you knew is gone."

- Guardian of Forever, after McCoy changes the timeline


"My friend is obviously Chinese. I see you've noticed the ears. They're actually easy to explain... He caught his head in a mechanical... rice picker."

- Kirk to the police officer, explaining Spock's alien appearance


"A lie is a very poor way to say hello."

- Keeler, meeting Kirk and Spock


"One day soon, man is going to be able to harness incredible energies – maybe even the atom; energies that could ultimately hurl us to other worlds in some sort of spaceship. And the men that reach out into space will be able to find ways to feed the hungry millions of the world and to cure their diseases. They will be able to find a way to give each man hope and a common future... and those are the days worth living for."

- Keeler, on her vision of man's future


"We have a flop."
"We have a what, captain?"
"A place to sleep."
"One might have said so in the first place."

- Kirk and Spock


"I am endeavoring, ma'am, to construct a mnemonic memory circuit using stone knives and bearskins."

- Spock, as Keeler sees his work on the tricorder


"Where would you estimate we belong, Miss Keeler?"
"You? At his side, as if you've always been there and always will."

- Spock and Keeler


"Captain. Even when he doesn't say it, he does."

- Keeler, on Spock


"Let me help. A hundred years or so from now, I believe, a famous novelist will write a classic using that theme. He'll recommend those three words even over I love you."

- Kirk, to Keeler


"Captain, suppose we discover that in order to set things straight again, Edith Keeler must die? "

- Spock about Keeler and history


"You! What planet is this?"

- McCoy, startling a homeless man upon his arrival in the 20th century


"Peace was the way."
"She was right. But at the wrong time."

- Kirk and Spock, on Keeler's peace movement


"Spock... I believe... I'm in love with Edith Keeler."
"Jim, Edith Keeler must die."

- Kirk and Spock


"I have a friend that talks about Earth the same way that you do. Would you like to meet him?"
"I'm a surgeon, not a psychiatrist."

- Keeler and McCoy


"Save her – do as your heart tells you to do – and millions will die who did not die before."

- Spock, to Kirk


"You deliberately stopped me, Jim! I could have saved her! Do you know what you just did?"
"He knows, Doctor...He knows."

- McCoy (to Kirk) and Spock, on Keeler's death


"Time has resumed its shape. All is as it was before."

- Guardian of Forever, after Kirk, Spock, and McCoy return


"Let's get the hell out of here."

- Kirk, before beaming back to the Enterprise


"I am a surgeon, not a psychiatrist."

-McCoy, to Keeler

Background information

Production timeline

Story

  • The title of this episode refers to both the dead city on the time planet and New York itself, where the timeline will either be restored or disrupted. In Ellison's original script, Kirk, upon first seeing the city sparkling like a jewel on a high mountaintop, reverently says it looks like "a city on the edge of forever". In Ellison's first treatment for this episode, the city they traveled back in time to was Chicago.
  • When asked in a February 26, 1992 interview whether the makers of this episode consciously intended it to have the contemporaneous anti-Vietnam-war movement as subtext, associate producer Robert Justman replied, "Of course we did." [1]
  • In The Star Trek Compendium, Allan Asherman suggests that the name "Keeler" is derived from the "keel" of a ship, the longitudinal element of a vessel that keeps it held together – much as Keeler herself keeps the time continuum from coming apart. It also could be interpreted as a hybrid of "killer" and "healer"--a reference to her dual role as the focal point of the time flow. In Ellison's first treatment for this episode, Edith's last name was Koestler.
  • Ellison's original story outline and first draft script did not feature Dr. McCoy, but an Enterprise crewman named Beckwith, who was dealing drugs among the crew. Beckwith murdered a fellow crewman named LeBeque, who was on the verge of turning him in, escaped to the planet the ship was orbiting, and went through the Time Vortex, operated by a mysterious ancient race called "The Guardians" and changed history. The Enterprise was gone, and a savage pirate ship called the Condor was in its place, full of renegade humans. Kirk and Spock follow Beckwith through the time portal to 1930 New York City, where Kirk falls in love with young social worker Edith Keeler (Koestler in the story outline). Finally, with the help of a legless World War I veteran called Trooper (who dies during the episode's action), they find Beckwith. In the end, Kirk does not stop him saving Edith: he freezes at the crucial moment and Spock prevents her rescue. In a brief epilogue, Spock visits Kirk in his quarters and attempts to console him, saying that "No other woman was offered the universe for love." (The Star Trek Compendium), [2]
  • In Ellison's very first story outline, Beckwith was sentenced to death after he murdered LeBeque, and Kirk ordered his execution to take place on the next deserted planet the Enterprise comes across. Hence, they beam down with Beckwith and a firing squad to the Guardian Planet. This was very soon eliminated from the story. (These Are the Voyages: TOS Season One). In the revised script by Ellison, Beckwith escapes from Spock and jumps into the Time Vortex again; however he ends up trapped in a super nova time loop which kills him over and over again.
  • Ellison also wrote scenes in which the regular characters acted very much unlike their usual behavior. For example, Kirk and Spock got into a heavy argument when Spock, witnessing a street speaker calling out against foreign immigrants, called the human race barbaric. Kirk then claims he should've just left Spock to be lynched by the mob. (These Are the Voyages: TOS Season One)
  • Ellison's script was unusable for the series for many different reasons. Gene Roddenberry objected to the idea that drug usage would still be a problem in the 23rd century, and even present among starship crews. Also, the production staff was heavily against Kirk's final inactivity. It seemed that being unable to decide and act, viewers could never be able to accept him as the strong leader figure in later episodes. Elements, such as the Guardians and the Condor and its crew were simply impossible to create on the series' budget. (The Star Trek Compendium), [3]
  • Originally then-story editor Steven W. Carabatsos got the job to rewrite Ellison's script, but his draft was not used. Instead, Ellison agreed to make a rewrite himself, which was again deemed unsuitable. Producer Gene L. Coon also got himself into the rewriting. Finally, the new story editor, D.C. Fontana got the assignment to rewrite Ellison's script and make it suitable for the series. Fontana's draft was then slightly rewritten by Roddenberry to become the final shooting draft. Much of the finished episode is the product of Fontana, who went uncredited (as did all the other writers) for her contribution. Only two lines from Ellison's original teleplay survive in the final episode, both spoken by the Guardian: "Since before your sun burned hot in space, since before your race was born," and "Time has resumed its shape." (Inside Star Trek: The Real Story)
  • Coon is mainly responsible for the small comical elements of the story, including the famous "rice picker" scene, which Ellison has reportedly hated. (These Are the Voyages: TOS Season One)
  • Ellison was dismayed with the changes Roddenberry and Fontana made to his story, so much so, that he wished his credit to read "written by Cordwainer Bird", a request Roddenberry denied. Though Ellison had the final right to have his pseudonym attached, he claims that Roddenberry made veiled threats that if he did so he would be "blackballed" in the television and motion picture industry. Despite this feud, Roddenberry would list this as one of his top ten favorite episodes in an issue of TV Guide celebrating the 25th anniversary of Star Trek. In his own defense, Ellison stated he had no real problem with D.C. Fontana rewriting him, but rather with the extent and number of unpaid rewrites the studio and network got out of him, to say nothing of exaggeration-prone Gene Roddenberry telling fans that Ellison's script showed "Scotty selling drugs" (the script did not feature Scotty at all). (Star Trek: Four Generations)
  • Roddenberry apparently denied Ellison's pseudonym request because he knew everyone in the science fiction community was aware that the "Cordwainer Bird" credit was Ellison's way of signaling his dissatisfaction with the way production people treated what he wrote. It would have meant that Star Trek was no different than all the other "science fiction" shows in mistreating quality writers, and could have resulted in prose science fiction writers avoiding contributing to the program. (Inside Star Trek: The Real Story)

Production

  • This was the most expensive episode produced during the first season, with a budget of $245,316, and also the most expensive episode of the entire series, except the two pilots. The average cost of a first season episode was around $190,000. Also, production went one and half days over schedule, resulting in eight shooting days instead of the usual six. (Inside Star Trek: The Real Story)
  • Joseph Pevney was chosen to direct on this episode because of his experience in directing more than twenty feature films. (These Are the Voyages: TOS Season One)
  • There is a scene in the original 1960s broadcast version that has been partially deleted in some editions. When McCoy meets Rodent holding the milk bottle, the scene ends with McCoy collapsing, then cuts to McCoy meeting Keeler in the Mission. As originally filmed, after McCoy collapses, Rodent picks McCoy's pocket and takes his hand phaser (which he took from the transporter chief) and accidentally sets it on overload, and kills himself. The scene is present in its original form in DVD and laserdisc versions. [4] [5]
  • The network heavily objected to Kirk's last line, "Let's get the hell out of here" and wanted it to be removed from the episode. [6] The word "Hell" was used four times in The Original Series, the other three being "Space Seed", when Kirk quotes Milton, "It is better to rule in Hell than serve in Heaven", "The Alternative Factor", when Lazarus tells his counterpart, "I'll chase you into the very fires of hell!", and "The Doomsday Machine", when Decker describes the berserker as "right out of hell." "City" marks the only time that the word was used as an expletive, rather than a reference to the domicile of the damned.

Sets and props

  • The footage seen through the time portal is, for the most part, lifted from old Paramount films.
  • The set used for New York City in this episode (called 40 Acres) is the same set used for The Andy Griffith Show. While Kirk is walking with Edith Keeler, they pass the courthouse and Floyd's barber shop. The same backlot was used for location shooting in "Miri" and "The Return of the Archons".
  • The alley in which Kirk steals the clothing from the fire-escape is the same alley seen in "Miri", in which Spock and the guards have debris dumped on them by the children.
  • Director Joseph Pevney couldn't complete all scenes scheduled to be filmed at 40 Acres on schedule. However, the backlot was already booked for filming by The Andy Griffith Show, so the arrival of McCoy to the past and Rodent's death had to be filmed on a studio alleyway behind Desilu Stage 10. (These Are the Voyages: TOS Season One)
  • Desilu Stage 11, usually not a Star Trek stage, was used for filming the mission interiors. The stage was occupied by My Three Sons previously, but as that series was moved to another location, it became available for the crew to film. (These Are the Voyages: TOS Season One)
  • The stock footage shot of the outside of Kirk and Spock's flop, seen after the man kills himself with McCoy's phaser, shows the sign for a fallout shelter on it. There were, however, no nuclear weapons in 1930.
  • The Guardian of Forever was designed by Art Director Rolland M. Brooks. Normally, set design was the purview of his colleague Matt Jefferies, but due to illness, Brooks took over his chores for the Guardian. When Jefferies returned to his duties and saw the donut-shaped set piece for the first time, he reportedly exclaimed, "What the hell is this?!", according to Story Editor Fontana. (These Are the Voyages: TOS Season One, 1st ed, p. 517) Special effects artist Jim Rugg was responsible for the light effects for the Guardian. (Cinefantastique, Vol 17 #2, p. 24)
  • Together with Jefferies, Rugg was also responsible for Spock's computer-aid to access the information in his tricorder for the episode, as Jefferies recalled, "When a script came out, Roddenberry would say, "I need something that supposedly does such and such...come up with something." So we would work together on the workbench with Jimmy Rugg and see what we could cobble together.", to which Rugg added, "We got a bunch of antique vacuum tubes–real '30s types–and added a few blinking lights among them." Rugg subsequently oversaw its destruction in the episode. (Cinefantastique, Vol 17 #2, p. 24)

Music

  • Due to copyright issues, the original Ray Noble recording of "Goodnight, Sweetheart" was replaced during the 1980s by another version for VHS and Laserdisc releases. However, Paramount's 1980 "Television Classics" home video release of this episode retains the original recording. Eventually this was corrected for the DVD release. New music was also composed for this episode, incorporating the song, but the composer of this music is not credited. Template:Brokenlink
  • According to The Music of Star Trek, Fred Steiner takes credit for scoring new music (although sparse - only a few cues) for this episode. Most of the episode was tracked with prior music, including Joseph Mullendore, Gerald Fried, and Alexander Courage. Also, music from "Shore Leave" is heavily present, including the score for the police chase, and some humorous cues in certain scenes. Most of the music accompanying the romance of Kirk and Edith Keeler are taken from "The Conscience of the King".

Special effects

  • Stock footage from "Dagger of the Mind" and "The Naked Time" is used for Kirk's and Spock's reaction shots to McCoy's cordrazine overdose on the bridge.
  • Double-exposures allowed Kirk and Spock to leap out of brick walls in this episode.
  • During the speech scene in the Mission where Kirk and Spock have sat down with their soup, the director repeated (and slowed down) several close-up shots of Spock and Kirk, taken from later in the scene, and used them as reaction shots during Edith's prognostications.
  • The close up of the tricorder showing the "rewinding video" is used several other times throughout the series.

Continuity

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A boxing poster seen in this episode and later recreated for DS9: "Past Tense, Part II"

  • No stardate is logged in the episode. Bjo Trimble assigned a stardate of 3134 based on Harlan Ellison's original teleplay, which covered stardates 3134.6-8.
  • A comparison of the calendar on the wall behind Kirk and Edith when she calls him and Spock "uncommon workmen" to the real calendar from 1930 shows that this episode was taking place in May, 1930, however the calendar year and date were taped-over and the month also shows only 30 days.
  • Clark Gable, who was by no means a leading man in 1930, was not the original choice of reference. The final shooting draft of this script has Edith reference "a Richard Dix movie", but the crew on the set felt Dix's name wouldn't be familiar to viewers in the 1960s.
  • The use of the song "Goodnight, Sweetheart" is a slight anachronism, since the song was first recorded in 1931. [7]
  • Edith Keeler tells Kirk "Let me help". Kirk replies, "A hundred years or so from now, a famous novelist will write a classic using that theme. He'll recommend those three words, even over 'I love you'." Kirk tells her that the novelist will come from a planet circling the far left star in Orion's belt: Zeta Orionis (or Alnitak).
  • This is the first mention of Nazi Germany in Star Trek. A race which adopted a Nazi-style regime also appears in TOS: "Patterns of Force". The theme is reprised in later shows: on VOY: "The Killing Game", where Hirogen take over USS Voyager and use the holodeck to recreate Nazi Germany, and then in ENT: "Zero Hour", and "Storm Front", when agents from the Temporal Cold War send Captain Archer and the Enterprise NX-01 back to the Second World War. Template:Brokenlink
  • The portal is revisited in the animated series episode "Yesteryear" and numerous books.
  • In one scene in this episode, a poster can be seen advertising a boxing event at Madison Square Garden featuring "Kid McCook" vs. "Mike Mason". For the Star Trek: Deep Space Nine episode "Past Tense, Part II", scenic artists Doug Drexler and Michael Okuda created a near replica of this boxing poster for a scene set in 1930 San Francisco; the DS9 poster features the same boxers, and says that it is "their first rematch since Madison Square Garden".[8](X)
  • Star Trek: Voyager also made a small tribute to this episode in "Future's End", when Janeway likens late-20th century computer technology to "stone knives and bearskins".

Reception

  • With regards to "The City on the Edge of Forever", Joan Collins has stated, "To this day, people still want to talk about that episode – some remember me for that more than anything else I've done. I am amazed at the enduring popularity of Star Trek and particularly of that episode." Collins adds, "At the time none of us would have predicted the longevity of the show. I couldn't be more pleased – or more honored – to be part of Star Trek history." (Star Trek 30 Years) Ms. Collins' memory of her Trek experience seems hazy, however. In her 1985 autobiography, Past Imperfect (p. 248) she makes a few errors regarding the episode: for example, in addition to the common mistake of referring to Mr. Spock as Dr. Spock, she identifies her character as Edith Cleaver instead of Edith Keeler, and she also claims that Spock, not Kirk, allowed her character to be killed – a plot point that was not in the version of the script that was actually shot. Most significantly, she claims Edith tried to "prove to the world that Hitler was a nice guy."
  • This episode was chosen by William Shatner as his favorite episode of the entire series in the Star Trek: Fan Collective - Captain's Log DVD set. However, in his book Star Trek Memories, Shatner wrote that "The Devil in the Dark" was his favorite episode. Therefore, he seems to have two favorites.
  • This episode was chosen by Eugene W. "Rod" Roddenberry (Son of Gene Roddenberry) to be his favorite episode. Template:Brokenlink
  • The book Star Trek 101, by Terry J. Erdmann and Paula M. Block, lists this episode as one of "Ten Essential Episodes" from the original Star Trek series.
  • TV Guide ranked this episode #80 on their list of the Top 100 Episodes. [9]

Awards

  • By popular acclaim, this is the single best episode of the original series, earning a 1968 Hugo Award for Best Dramatic Presentation (and the other four nominees were all episodes of Star Trek). It was 25 years before another television program received the honor, "The Inner Light". TV Guide also ranked it #68 in their 100 Most Memorable Moments in TV History feature in the 1 July 1995 edition, and also featured it in another issue on the 100 greatest TV episodes of all time.
  • This episode is the only Star Trek episode to win a Writers Guild of America Award. Ellison took the award home for "Best Written Dramatic Episode", for his original version of the teleplay. On the award ceremony (where Roddenberry, Coon, Robert Justman, Herb Solow and other Star Trek production people were present), Ellison loudly spoke out against executives rewriting his and other writers' work in the industry. (Inside Star Trek: The Real Story)

Novelizations and adaptations

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Foto-novelization of the episode

  • Bantam Books published a series of novelizations called "fotonovels," which took photographic stills from actual episodes and arranged word balloons and text over them, to create a comic book formatted story. The first installment was an adaptation of this episode and featured a short interview with Ellison.
  • In his adaptation of the story in Star Trek 2, James Blish explained to readers that he tried to preserve the best elements of both Ellison's original script and the final version. In the original, because Kirk does not act to prevent Edith's death, Spock later tells him that "No other woman was ever offered the universe for love." Blish's adaptation preserves the final version of Kirk allowing Edith to die, with the result that Spock tells him, "No other woman was ever almost offered the universe for love." Additionally, in this adaptation, during Edith's soup-kitchen prophecies, Spock leans over to Kirk and says, "Bonner the Stochastic," to which Kirk replies, "He won't be born for a hundred years yet." Bonner the Stochastic was a character who appeared in several of Blish's novels, and was inserted into this episode's prose adaptation by Blish himself. Stochastic refers to any process (including thinking) that uses randomness or conjecture.
  • The final shooting script, dated 27 January 1967, specifies that the novelist who came up with "Let me help" was Patrick Koluuunahmeheheh Tajnaahme. Ellison's original screenplay, as well as Blish's adaptation, had an additional final scene, where Spock privately offers his condolences to a grieving Kirk and suggests that he accompany him to Vulcan to come to terms with the experience.
Crucible montage

Crucible cover art montage

  • The 2006 Crucible trilogy of novels follows up on plot elements from this episode. In Provenance of Shadows by David R. George III, it is shown what happened to the version of McCoy and Earth when he went back in time and altered history by saving Edith. McCoy places constant ads to try and signal for help in the future, but soon realizes that no help is coming. On advice, he makes his way south, ending up in a small town outside of Atlanta. There, he becomes the local doctor, marries a widow, and is eventually killed when the hostilities with the Nazis (spilling into US borders in this timeline) escalate. The novel also reveals that, in the proper timeline, Kirk and Spock spent 47 days in New York City from January to March 1930.
  • A sequel to this story was presented in Gold Key Comics' TOS issue #56 "No Time Like the Past".
  • An episode of South Park, in which one of the children on a trapped school bus wearing a red commander uniform was killed, was given the same title as this episode.
  • Ellison's original teleplay was adapted by IDW Publishing for a five-issue comic book series titled Harlan Ellison's The City on the Edge of Forever.

Remastered information

"The City on the Edge of Forever" was the fifth episode of the remastered version of The Original Series to air. It premiered in syndication on the weekend of 7 October 2006 and featured new effects shots of the Enterprise and the time planet from space, a slightly tweaked pan up from the planet's surface, an enhanced disintegration effect as Rodent accidentally sets off McCoy's phaser, cleaned-up mattes and static effects in the tricorder insert shots, and eliminated the freeze-framing over the end credits.

With regards to some of the new updates, Rossi stated, "For instance, in "City on the Edge of the Forever," there's a line where Captain Kirk says, "'These ruins extend to the distance.'" So we extended that shot into a 16:9 aspect ratio and created all these wonderful ruins." Template:Brokenlink

Not everything worked out as planned, however, "The Guardian planet [in 'City'] is this ancient world where supposedly the civilization died many millennia ago, and so I think what everyone expected to see is a gray, barren planet. Which we could have done – we can make a lot of gray, barren planets," says Rossi. In their attempt to recreate the consistency of the original soundstage-filmed planetside scenes, "We started looking at the backdrop – the cloth backdrop that they used – and it was kind of a purplish color, and so we wanted to tie these things together. What the visual effects team did was, create this rocky barren world with these giant purplish desert flats. Now, unfortunately, without us being able to come into your home and say, 'These are giant desert purplish flats,' I think a lot of people read them as oceans, which is kind of unfortunate. But that's what we were going for." Template:Brokenlink

The next remastered episode to air was "I, Mudd".

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References

20th century; Alnitak; atomic bomb; Bailey, Will; Barnes, Gus; Boise; "Bones"; Brooklyn Bridge; cent; City Council; constellations; cordrazine; duodynetic field core; Earth; Fischer's Infants Wear; flop; Floyd's Barber Shop; Gable, Clark; Germany; gold; "Goodnight Sweetheart; Great Depression; Great Pyramid; Guardian of Forever; Hebrew language; Hitler, Adolf; Kidd, Killer; Lloyd, Gus; logic; Madison Square Garden; March Bake Shop; Mason, Mike; Mason, Ricky; McCook, Kid; missionary; mechanical rice picker; mnemonic memory circuit; Mulaney, Charley; needle; Orion; Orpheum; Outer Mongolia; platinum; Prado, Manuel; Radio Corporation of America; Radiola 20; San Diego; Sencio, Buddy; silver; Singer's Book Store; suture; Star Dispatch, The; stone knives and bearskins; Thailand; time planet; tobacco; tricorder; Twenty-First Street Mission; unnamed planet; V-2 rocket; Vanguard Insurance Company; Victor Ice Company; Vulcan neck pinch; Walt's Restaurant; Widin Dairy Farm; wood alcohol; World War II; zinc

Other references

Bangkok; Cabe, Bobby; Jose, Alfredo Pedillo; Labeau, Jean; Lee's Summit; Missouri; Paris; The South; United States dollar; Washington, DC

  • Harlan Ellison; The City on the Edge of Forever; White Wolf Publishing; ISBN 1565049640 (1st edition, hardcover, 1996)

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