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The Romulan Bird-of-Prey was a type of starship used by the Romulan Star Empire in the 22nd century. Green in color, these crafts were so named because they were designed to appear as birds-of-prey. They were equipped with disruptor banks, as well as advanced cloaking technology. (ENT: "Minefield")

In the final draft script of "Minefield", the form of weaponry equipped aboard this type of Bird-of-Prey was described as firing "a pulse-weapon blast," with a script note immediately thereafter stating, "It's the alien equivalent of a photon torpedo."

History

Vessels of this configuration were first encountered by Starfleet in 2152, when the United Earth starship Enterprise NX-01 inadvertently encroached upon a Romulan-claimed star system, which was protected by a field of cloaked mines. A vessel of this class decloaked and approached Enterprise, as it had unknowingly trespassed into Romulan space. The Romulan commander hailed (on audio only) and ordered the Enterprise crew to leave or be destroyed, though Enterprise's translator failed to lock onto the Romulan language. To prove the Romulans' point, the Bird-of-Prey fired two warning shots at the Starfleet vessel, and Enterprise commanding officer Jonathan Archer ordered helmsman Travis Mayweather to activate Enterprise's quantum beacons to avoid hitting any of the cloaked mines. The Romulan vessel then re-cloaked. Although Enterprise's quantum beacons proved successful in penetrating the mines' cloaks, they were useless against the more advanced cloaking devices used by the Birds-of-Prey.

Later, two more of these ships decloaked and ordered Enterprise to detach its hull plating or be destroyed. Enterprise eventually left the system after retrieving Captain Archer and armory officer Lieutenant Reed, following detonation of a cloaked Romulan mine safely away from Enterprise. When Enterprise subsequently went to warp, the two remaining Romulan ships did not pursue. (ENT: "Minefield")

Ships of the class

See: Romulan Birds-of-Prey

Appendices

Background information

Wah Chang's Romulan Bird-of-Prey

In the script of "Minefield", this type of ship was described as "a spooky-looking craft, there's something bird-like about its design (we will later learn that this is a Romulan vessel of the era)." A subsequent description in the same teleplay referred to the ship as an "ominous-looking craft."

The responsibility of designing this style of Romulan Bird-of-Prey, the first new Romulan ship to appear on Star Trek: Enterprise, was given to Concept Artist John Eaves. He was hugely excited to be presented with the opportunity of designing a new starship for such a long-established alien race as the Romulans. Eaves took his cue from the earlier-depicted, 23rd century version of the Romulan Bird-of-Prey, which had been designed by Wah Chang and featured in Star Trek: The Original Series. Remembered Eaves, "Immediately the consensus [in the art department] was to retro-out Wah Chang's original design for our episode." One reason why Eaves was a suitable candidate to assume this task was that he was very familiar with the history of Star Trek design. He knew the Bird-of-Prey he was designing for Enterprise needed to pay homage to Chang's equivalent. (Star Trek: The Official Starships Collection, issue 27, p. 10) "I didn't want to veer too far from it, but I wanted to do a phase prior to The Original Series version," reflected Eaves. "I followed his lines a little bit." (Star Trek: The Official Starships Collection, issue 27, p. 11)

Next, John Eaves opted to add further segregation to the parts of the hull, segmenting them where one section could be seen joining another. This was key to him modifying the ship, as it made the design appear slightly older, though also dynamic. The use of modern visual effects meant the updated design would not have worked with the smooth hull style from its TOS predecessor, anyway. "The VFX guys always wanted deep shadows and detail lines to help make the ship look authentic on screen," said Eaves. "Something that was completely smooth, like Chang's design was, would never make it through the approval process today." (Star Trek: The Official Starships Collection, issue 27, pp. 11-12)

One detail which John Eaves added in his early design concepts was small wing fin attachments on the outside of the nacelles. These were incorporated in an initial black-and-white sketch he illustrated while experimenting with various looks for the ship. "After I'd done a couple of versions of it," he stated, "I abandoned them. I decided I'd taken it too far past where the design architecture had been established." The nacelles in specific also underwent revision in a subsequent series of color concept images, developing to have a more threatening look, as Eaves aimed to devise a style more in keeping with the Romulans. "The nacelles on the early black-and-white drawing seemed a little bit too rounded," he explained, "so that's why they evolved into jagged points. I thought the early design had too much of a soft, friendly look for an aggressive ship. That's why they go from the rounded tips to the more bull-horn-type points that I did in the colored drawings." (Star Trek: The Official Starships Collection, issue 27, pp. 11 & 12)

As a final homage to Wah Chang's original Romulan Bird-of-Prey, John Eaves drew a colorful war-bird graphic on the underside of the altered configuration, in one of his concept illustrations. "I was trying to take his [Chang's] drawing back a little in time as well, but make it fit the new shape," Eaves recollected. Though he hoped this facet of the design would make it onto the finalized digital model, the graphic was ultimately vetoed because a decision was made that the stylized bird picture clashed with the overall design ethos which had been established on ENT. (Star Trek: The Official Starships Collection, issue 27, pp. 12 & 13) Eaves related, "Just when you think you've done the right thing... lighting strikes.... The graphic had to be removed... Ahhh, shuckydarn!!!!" [1] He elaborated, "In fact, it got rejected brutally. I was hoping it would make it through because it was a neat way to pay homage to Chang's ship. But I understood that it had to go, as Enterprise was set in a different era." (Star Trek: The Official Starships Collection, issue 27, p. 12) No motive for the removal was made explicit to Eaves, though. [2] Robert Bonchune offered, "It was rejected for no other reason than, once again, contempt for the Trek, the fans and the Original Series by… uh, 'management'... you know who they are. (Oh, and it wasn't their idea; that didn't help....)" [3] Even though it never appeared on-screen, the bird graphic was featured on the bottom of a version of the Bird-of-Prey, which Bonchune created. (Star Trek: The Official Starships Collection, issue 27, p. 10)

Despite the elimination of the bird picture on the final design of the Romulan craft, John Eaves opted to add lots of surface detail to the ship's exterior, helping the vessel seem more realistic when it became a computer-generated model. The finished design appeared in a concept image dated July 2002. (Star Trek: The Official Starships Collection, issue 27, pp. 12 & 13) Eaves concluded, "The architecture was pulled back about a hundred years and the end result was just enough to still pay homage without creating a whole new ship." [4]

While Producer Michael Sussman was writing the episode "Kir'Shara", he as well as Season Four showrunner and Co-Executive Producer Manny Coto initially wanted the episode to end with a scene in which one of the Birds-of-Prey picked up a Romulan operative from Vulcan. The ship would have been depicted swooping up above the camera, revealing the colorful bird graphic was painted on the bottom of its hull. However, there wasn't enough money in the show's budget to include that scene. Nonetheless, Sussman later opined that the look of the Bird-of-Prey as it appeared in "Minefield" was "wonderful." [5]

The fact that the Birds-of-Prey in the 2150s were equipped with cloaking devices constitutes an apparent continuity violation, because a comment made by Spock, in "Balance of Terror", gives the impression that cloaks were apparently unheard of before the 2266 setting of that episode. Hence, several staff writers on Star Trek: Enterprise – among them Mike Sussman – believed that 22nd century Romulan ships should not have been equipped with cloaking devices, in keeping with "Balance of Terror". Manny Coto decided that Romulan ships would not have cloaks in any subsequent encounters. Whereas the 22nd century Bird-of-Prey was consistently portrayed without the colorful bird graphic on its underside, Lieutenant Stiles mentions in "Balance of Terror" that, during the Earth-Romulan War, Romulan ships of the time were painted like giant birds of prey (hence the name). The fact that this ship clearly has warp drive has also sometimes been viewed as being at odds with "Balance of Terror", wherein Montgomery Scott states that the Romulan ship only has "simple impulse." Scotty's statement can also be interpreted to mean that he was referring to power generation and not propulsion as impusle uses fusion reactors rather than the matter/antimatter reactions utilized by dedicated warp engines. This suggests that interstellar travel is possible but slow and inefficient when relying on impulse fusion reactors.

Apocrypha

Birds-of-Prey were seen in Star Trek: Tactical Assault as light cruisers.

According to the novel The Good That Men Do, these cloaking ships were one-offs. Romulan stealth technology was still in development, and the cloaked mines were considered a successful application of the technology, but the power requirements for cloaking a whole ship were problematic; sometime after the encounter with Enterprise, the prototype cloaking ship, Praetor Pontilus, was destroyed in an antimatter containment failure caused by its stealth systems. The Romulans believed it would be decades until a successful cloaking device could be developed.

In Star Trek Online, the Romulans use a similar design – classified as either a T'varo- or Malem-class light warbird – in the early 2400s. The Remans use these ships as well.

External links

Romulan Bird-of-Prey (22nd century) at Memory Beta, the wiki for licensed Star Trek works
Early design sketches at Eavesdropping with Johnny

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-'''Romulan Birds-of-Prey''' were starships used by the [[Romulan Star Empire]] in the [[22nd century]]. Green in color, they were so named due to their distinctive avian-like appearance. They were equipped with [[disruptor bank]]s, as well as advanced [[cloak]]ing technology.
+The '''Romulan Bird-of-Prey''' was a type of [[starship]] used by the [[Romulan Star Empire]] in the [[22nd century]]. Green in color, these crafts were so named because they were designed to appear as [[Raptor|birds-of-prey]]. They were equipped with [[disruptor bank]]s, as well as advanced [[cloaking technology]]. ({{ENT|Minefield}})
+{{bginfo|In the final draft script of "Minefield", the form of [[weapon]]ry equipped aboard this type of [[Bird-of-Prey]] was described as firing "a [[pulse-weapon]] blast," with a script note immediately thereafter stating, "''It's the [[alien]] equivalent of a [[photon torpedo]].''"}}
 == History ==
-These vessels were first encountered by [[Starfleet]] in [[2152]], when the {{EnterpriseNX}} inadvertently encroached upon a Romulan-claimed [[star system]], which was protected by a field of cloaked [[mine]]s. Although ''Enterprise''{{'}}s [[quantum beacon]]s proved successful in penetrating the mines' cloaks, they were useless against the Birds-of-Prey's more advanced cloaking devices. ({{ENT|Minefield}})
+Vessels of this configuration were first encountered by [[Starfleet]] in [[2152]], when the [[United Earth]] starship {{EnterpriseNX}} inadvertently encroached upon a [[Romulan]]-claimed [[star system]], which was protected by a field of cloaked [[mine]]s. A vessel of this class decloaked and approached ''Enterprise'', as it had unknowingly trespassed into Romulan [[space]]. The Romulan commander hailed (on audio only) and ordered the ''Enterprise'' [[crew]] to leave or be destroyed, though ''Enterprise''{{'}}s [[universal translator|translator]] failed to lock onto the [[Romulan language]]. To prove the Romulans' point, the Bird-of-Prey fired two warning shots at the Starfleet vessel, and ''Enterprise'' [[commanding officer]] [[Jonathan Archer]] ordered [[helmsman]] [[Travis Mayweather]] to activate ''Enterprise''{{'}}s [[quantum beacon]]s to avoid hitting any of the cloaked mines. The Romulan vessel then re-cloaked. Although ''Enterprise''{{'}}s quantum beacons proved successful in penetrating the mines' cloaks, they were useless against the more advanced cloaking devices used by the Birds-of-Prey.
+Later, two more of these ships decloaked and ordered ''Enterprise'' to detach its [[hull plating]] or be destroyed. ''Enterprise'' eventually left the system after retrieving Captain Archer and [[armory officer]] [[Lieutenant]] [[Malcolm Reed|Reed]], following detonation of a cloaked Romulan mine safely away from ''Enterprise''. When ''Enterprise'' subsequently went to [[warp drive|warp]], the two remaining Romulan ships did not pursue. ({{ENT|Minefield}})
 == Ships of the class ==
-* '''See''': [[Unnamed Romulan Birds-of-Prey]]
+{{see-list|Romulan 22nd Bird-of-Prey 000||Romulan Birds-of-Prey}}
 == Appendices ==
 === Background information ===
+[[File:Romulan Bird-of-Prey, 2260s profile.jpg|thumb|left|Wah Chang's Romulan Bird-of-Prey]]
-The fact that the Birds-of-Prey in the [[2150s]] were equipped with cloaking devices constitutes an apparent continuity violation, because Spock's comment gives the impression that cloaks were apparently unheard of before {{e|Balance of Terror}}. However, this is Spock's own personal notion based on what he knows, and does not necessarily reflect the totality of the Federation's expertise on Romulan equipment. Alternatively, the fault could be said to lie with previous episodes, because "Minefield" was not the first time a cloaking device was seen on ''[[Star Trek: Enterprise|Enterprise]]''.  See also [[Earth-Romulan War]].
+In the script of "Minefield", this type of ship was described as "a spooky-looking craft, there's something bird-like about its design (we will later learn that this is a Romulan vessel of the era)." A subsequent description in the same teleplay referred to the ship as an "ominous-looking craft."
+The responsibility of designing this style of Romulan Bird-of-Prey, the first new Romulan ship to appear on {{s|ENT}}, was given to Concept Artist [[John Eaves]]. He was hugely excited to be presented with the opportunity of designing a new starship for such a long-established alien race as the Romulans. Eaves took his cue from the earlier-depicted, [[23rd century]] version of the [[Romulan Bird-of-Prey]], which had been designed by [[Wah Chang]] and featured in {{s|TOS}}. Remembered Eaves, "''Immediately the consensus [in the art department] was to retro-out Wah Chang's original design for our episode.''" One reason why Eaves was a suitable candidate to assume this task was that he was very familiar with the history of ''[[Star Trek]]'' design. He knew the Bird-of-Prey he was designing for ''Enterprise'' needed to pay homage to Chang's equivalent. (''[[Star Trek: The Official Starships Collection]]'', issue 27, p. 10) "''I didn't want to veer too far from it, but I wanted to do a phase prior to ''The Original Series'' version,''" reflected Eaves. "''I followed his lines a little bit.''" (''[[Star Trek: The Official Starships Collection]]'', issue 27, p. 11)
-The appearance of the 22nd century Bird-of-Prey, at face value, constitutes an apparent visual continuity violation as well, in that Lt. [[Stiles (Lieutenant)|Stiles]] mentioned in the same episode that during the [[Earth-Romulan War]], Romulan ships of the time were painted like giant birds of prey (hence the name). Some fans have speculated that the 22nd century Birds-of-Prey with their cloaking devices and overall pseudo-24th century appearance are the result of the [[Temporal Cold War]]. We can also assume that other classes of Romulan ships during the 22nd century were painted like giant birds, especially smaller, more easily manufactured cruisers, making a majority of their unseen fleet possibly able to validate the comments of Stiles. It is also possible that the Romulans did not adopt the Bird-of-Prey markings until the Earth-Romulan war had actually begun.
+Next, John Eaves opted to add further segregation to the parts of the hull, segmenting them where one section could be seen joining another. This was key to him modifying the ship, as it made the design appear slightly older, though also dynamic. The use of modern visual effects meant the updated design would not have worked with the smooth hull style from its TOS predecessor, anyway. "''The VFX guys always wanted deep shadows and detail lines to help make the ship look authentic on screen,''" said Eaves. "''Something that was completely smooth, like Chang's design was, would never make it through the approval process today.''" (''[[Star Trek: The Official Starships Collection]]'', issue 27, pp. 11-12)
-The fact that this ship clearly has [[warp drive]] has sometimes been viewed as being at odds with {{e|Balance of Terror}}, where [[Montgomery Scott]] states that the Romulan ship only has "simple [[impulse]]".
+One detail which John Eaves added in his early design concepts was small wing fin attachments on the outside of the nacelles. These were incorporated in an initial black-and-white sketch he illustrated while experimenting with various looks for the ship. "''After I'd done a couple of versions of it,''" he stated, "''I abandoned them. I decided I'd taken it too far past where the design architecture had been established.''" The nacelles in specific also underwent revision in a subsequent series of color concept images, developing to have a more threatening look, as Eaves aimed to devise a style more in keeping with the Romulans. "''The nacelles on the early black-and-white drawing seemed a little bit too rounded,''" he explained, "''so that's why they evolved into jagged points. I thought the early design had too much of a soft, friendly look for an aggressive ship. That's why they go from the rounded tips to the more bull-horn-type points that I did in the colored drawings.''" (''[[Star Trek: The Official Starships Collection]]'', issue 27, pp. 11 & 12)
-Several staff writers on ''Star Trek: Enterprise'' &ndash; among them Producer [[Mike Sussman]] &ndash; believed that 22nd century Romulan ships should not have been equipped with cloaking devices, in keeping with "Balance of Terror". Season Four showrunner and Co-Executive Producer [[Manny Coto]] decided that Romulan ships would not have cloaks in any subsequent encounters. Birds-of-Prey were seen in ''[[Star Trek: Tactical Assault]]'' as light cruisers.
+As a final homage to Wah Chang's original Romulan Bird-of-Prey, John Eaves drew a colorful war-bird graphic on the underside of the altered configuration, in one of his concept illustrations. "''I was trying to take his [Chang's] drawing back a little in time as well, but make it fit the new shape,''" Eaves recollected. Though he hoped this facet of the design would make it onto the finalized [[CGI|digital]] model, the graphic was ultimately vetoed because a decision was made that the stylized bird picture clashed with the overall design ethos which had been established on ENT. (''[[Star Trek: The Official Starships Collection]]'', issue 27, pp. 12 & 13) Eaves related, "''Just when you think you've done the right thing... lighting strikes.... The graphic had to be removed... Ahhh, shuckydarn!!!!''" {{Eavesdropping|2009/03/24/romulans-from-enterprise}} He elaborated, "''In fact, it got rejected brutally. I was hoping it would make it through because it was a neat way to pay homage to Chang's ship. But I understood that it had to go, as ''Enterprise'' was set in a different era.''" (''[[Star Trek: The Official Starships Collection]]'', issue 27, p. 12) No motive for the removal was made explicit to Eaves, though. {{Eavesdropping|2009/03/24/romulans-from-enterprise/#comment-348}} [[Robert Bonchune]] offered, "''It was rejected for no other reason than, once again, contempt for the ''Trek'', the [[Trekkie|fans]] and the ''Original Series'' by… uh, 'management'... you know who they are. (Oh, and it wasn't their idea; that didn't help....)''" {{Eavesdropping|2009/03/24/romulans-from-enterprise/#comment-419}} Even though it never appeared on-screen, the bird graphic was featured on the bottom of a version of the Bird-of-Prey, which Bonchune created. (''[[Star Trek: The Official Starships Collection]]'', issue 27, p. 10)
+Despite the elimination of the bird picture on the final design of the Romulan craft, John Eaves opted to add lots of surface detail to the ship's exterior, helping the vessel seem more realistic when it became a computer-generated model. The finished design appeared in a concept image dated {{m|July|2002}}. (''[[Star Trek: The Official Starships Collection]]'', issue 27, pp. 12 & 13) Eaves concluded, "''The architecture was pulled back about a hundred years and the end result was just enough to still pay homage without creating a whole new ship.''" {{Eavesdropping|2009/03/24/romulans-from-enterprise}}
+While Producer [[Michael Sussman]] was writing the episode {{e|Kir'Shara}}, he as well as [[ENT Season 4|Season Four]] showrunner and Co-Executive Producer [[Manny Coto]] initially wanted the episode to end with a scene in which one of the Birds-of-Prey picked up a Romulan operative from {{dis|Vulcan|planet}}. The ship would have been depicted swooping up above the camera, revealing the colorful bird graphic was painted on the bottom of its hull. However, there wasn't enough money in the show's budget to include that scene. Nonetheless, Sussman later opined that the look of the Bird-of-Prey as it appeared in "Minefield" was "wonderful." {{TrekFM|warp-five/113}}
+The fact that the Birds-of-Prey in the [[2150s]] were equipped with cloaking devices constitutes an apparent continuity violation, because a comment made by [[Spock]], in {{e|Balance of Terror}}, gives the impression that cloaks were apparently unheard of before the [[2266]] setting of that episode. Hence, several staff writers on ''Star Trek: Enterprise'' &ndash; among them Mike Sussman &ndash; believed that 22nd century Romulan ships should not have been equipped with cloaking devices, in keeping with "Balance of Terror". Manny Coto decided that Romulan ships would not have cloaks in any subsequent encounters. Whereas the 22nd century Bird-of-Prey was consistently portrayed without the colorful bird graphic on its underside, Lieutenant {{dis|Stiles|Lieutenant}} mentions in "Balance of Terror" that, during the [[Earth-Romulan War]], Romulan ships of the time were painted like giant birds of prey (hence the name). The fact that this ship clearly has [[warp drive]] has also sometimes been viewed as being at odds with "Balance of Terror", wherein [[Montgomery Scott]] states that the Romulan ship only has "simple [[impulse]]." Scotty's statement can also be interpreted to mean that he was referring to power generation and not propulsion as impusle uses fusion reactors rather than the matter/antimatter reactions utilized by dedicated warp engines. This suggests that interstellar travel is possible but slow and inefficient when relying on impulse fusion reactors.
 === Apocrypha ===
+Birds-of-Prey were seen in ''[[Star Trek: Tactical Assault]]'' as light cruisers.
-According to the novel ''[[The Good That Men Do]]'', these cloaking ships were one-offs. Romulan stealth technology was still in development, the cloaked mines were considered a successful application of the technology but the power requirements for cloaking a whole ship were problematic, sometime after the encounter with the ''Enterprise'' the prototype cloaking ship, ''Praetor Pontilus'', was destroyed in an antimatter containment failure caused by its stealth systems. The Romulans believed it would be decades until a successful cloaking device could be developed.
+According to the {{novel}} ''[[The Good That Men Do]]'', these cloaking ships were one-offs. Romulan stealth technology was still in development, and the cloaked mines were considered a successful application of the technology, but the power requirements for cloaking a whole ship were problematic; sometime after the encounter with ''Enterprise'', the [[prototype]] cloaking ship, ''Praetor Pontilus'', was destroyed in an [[antimatter containment]] failure caused by its stealth systems. The Romulans believed it would be decades until a successful cloaking device could be developed.
-In ''[[Star Trek Online]]'', the Romulans use a similar design - classified as a ''T'varo''-class [[frigate]] - in the early 2400s. The [[Reman]]s use these ships as well.
+In ''[[Star Trek Online]]'', the Romulans use a similar design &ndash; classified as either a ''T'varo''- or ''Malem''-class light [[warbird]] &ndash; in the early [[2400s]]. The [[Reman]]s use these ships as well.
 === External links ===
-*{{NCwiki|Romulan bird-of-prey (22nd century)}}
+*{{mbeta|Romulan bird-of-prey (22nd century)|Romulan Bird-of-Prey (22nd century)}}
 *{{Eavesdropping|2009/03/24/romulans-from-enterprise/|Early design sketches|external}}