===[[Emergence]] (July 13th)===

Since the criteria for featured status have become more stringent, I do not feel that this article is any longer worthy of featured status for the following reasons: <br />

- Numerous spelling and grammatical errors<br />

- Absent background information<br />

- Poorly formatted references<br />

- Questionable use of pictures<br />

Personally, I think that there are better written articles that are '''not''' featured (and probably do not deserve the status as of yet).--[[User:Scimitar|Scimitar]] 13:29, 13 Jul 2005 (UTC)

* '''Second'''. Because of spelling and grammatic errors and poor formatting. Lack of background information and "questionable" image use are, in my opinion, no reason to object featured status. [[User:Ottens|Ottens]] 11:43, 14 Jul 2005 (UTC)

* '''Abstention'''. The article has been edited, see its talk page. [[User:Mornsbar|Mornsbar]] 16:08, 18 Jul 2005 (UTC)

*This page needs to be re-evaluated since the above changes were made. --[[User:Gvsualan|Alan del Beccio]] 06:22, 3 Aug 2005 (UTC)

*I've re-evaluated it since and I'm still not satisfied with it. There are still grammatical errors and instead of correctly formatting the references, they have simply been truncated, almost like amputating a limb to avoid healing a scratch. The odd pointless references are made too such as "heading".--[[User:Scimitar|Scimitar]] 22:42, 3 Aug 2005 (UTC)

*'''Third''' The article also does not follow the usual Act 1, 2 , 3 etc. format. I thought featured episodes must be in that format, rather than have chapter names. Also, there isn't enough info in any section but the summary. [[User:Tobyk777|Tobyk777]] 22:45, 10 Aug 2005 (UTC)