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==={{ENT|Silent Enemy}}===
 
Sorry if I get this all muddled up, I haven't done anything relating to featured articles before, so if you guys can help me it will be much appreciated.
 
 
This is a '''self-nomination''' for the ENT episode Silent Enemy. I have done most of the work on it, which included:
 
*Re-writing the episode summary
 
*Adding photos
 
*Adding quotes
 
*Adding one or two pieces of background information
 
 
There has been only one or two very minor edits of the page since I finished with it, and I don't believe that the article can be extended any further. If you could enlighten me on what happens next, that'd be great. [[User:Dvp7|Dave]] 13:37, 1 May 2008 (UTC)
 
 
*'''Comment'''
 
:As you can see there is always a possibility to extend an article. I've went through the episode and added all (to me) known background performers and references. – [[User:ThomasHL|Tom]] 02:40, 8 May 2008 (UTC)
 
   
 
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United Federation of Planets

In keeping with the decision that was made two months ago, I have waited two months until re-submitting this nomination.

I now hereby re-nominate this article for Featured Article status. I believe it to be a good representation of MA's work in terms of clarity, structure, organization and content. What say ye all? – Watching... listening... 20:44, 19 May 2008 (UTC)

  • What the heck, Support ;-). But I think it would be even better if it had a sidebar along the lines of Romulan Star Empire.– Cleanse 07:11, 23 May 2008 (UTC)
  • OPPOSE I feel that the section about the government is a bit too weak, in particular the part about the judicary. An expansion of this entire area would be very helpful and give it the *umph* that it needs to be a FA. For instance, what about the Seventh Guarantee? Or Aaron Satie? Or the justice process in Author, Author? How about the relationship between the President and Starfleet and what we saw in Homefront? Those are just a few examples of what I mean. I also think a large section could be added speaking about the development of the Federation in Star Trek, in particular how it was referred to in the Original Series vs TNG vs Deep Space Nine as well as an appendix section comparing various facets of the Federation to real world governments. This article has promise, but right now I just think its there yet. -FC 19:57, 23 May 2008 (UTC)
  • You make very good points, and indeed, the article does need a bit of tightening. Well, the Fed Constitution and the Seventh Guarantee are already in the article under Federation Constitution. I believe most of the stuff you mention should be covered at Federation law (and I'll add a section which summaries and links to that article). The relationship between the President and Starfleet should indeed be added, probably under a new heading "Military" (where we can also given an overview and link to Starfleet). As for background on the development of the Federation, we have the information on various episode pages (especially those DS9 background sections contributed by Bertaut). Condensing this information on the UFP page would indeed be a good idea.– Cleanse 23:23, 23 May 2008 (UTC)

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