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==Nominations without objections==
 
==Nominations without objections==
   
===[[T'Pol]]===
 
I find it to be a precise, well-written and thought-out, clear informational article about the character. I therefore hereby submit it for Featured Article status. &ndash; [[User:Crimsondawn|''Crimsondawn'']]<sup>[[User Talk:Crimsondawn|<span style="color:#00FF00;"> ''hears you...''</span>]]</sup> 21:55, 22 May 2009 (UTC)
 
 
*SUPPORT!!! Not to toot my own horn, but I've gone over it and cleaned up some glaring (and not so glaring) grammatical and syntax errors so I am seconding this article for nomination (can I do that?) -[[User:Italianajt|Italianajt]] 19:43, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
 
**Indeed you can. In fact, this needs 5 supports in the minimum time in order to pass. --[[User:OuroborosCobra|OuroborosCobra]] <sup>[[User Talk:OuroborosCobra|<span style="color:#00FF00;">talk</span>]]</sup> 20:39, 29 May 2009 (UTC)
 
*<strike>'''Oppose''': The "clothing" list in the background information section is incomplete! This should either be removed or completed, preferably ''before'' featured article status is granted. --[[User:Defiant|Defiant]] 21:23, 31 May 2009 (UTC)</strike>
 
*:Well, looks like there are half the episodes from season 1 and 3 of season 3 missing (including naked T'Pol in Harbinger!). I can certainly work on those these next few days. But if everyone wants to remove the list (I vote keep it actually) I won't bother lol [[User:DhaliaUnsung|DhaliaUnsung]] 03:06, 1 June 2009 (UTC)
 
*:The clothing list is all finished! -- [[User:DhaliaUnsung|DhaliaUnsung]] 14:51, 14 June 2009 (UTC)
 
*<strike>'''Oppose''' - both myself and DhaliaUnsung have agreed that the "clothing" list could be improved if it listed how often T'Pol wore each outfit. As it is, the point of this section is completely lost on me, although it has (currently unrealized) potential. --[[User:Defiant|Defiant]] 17:45, 14 June 2009 (UTC)</strike>
 
*I '''support''' this nomination. The T'Pol article has been very helpful to me in the past, when researching the character for various endeavors. I find it organized, and very informative. -- [[User:Remember The Girl|Remember The Girl]] 22:05, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
 
*<strike>'''Comment''' - other than my clothing nitpick (see above), I find this article to have a repetitive sentence structure! Even though others might disagree with me and it is largely a very informative article, I feel this repeated structure draws me out of the article's meaning as the repetition is so prevalent. Although I've tried to introduce more variety of the sentence structures in this article, I still feel it could use a lot of work and would be willing to support the page if it didn't have so much of this repetition, as my clothing nitpick is just that - a trivial nitpick. I'm not sure what you call the type of sentence structure that this article uses time and again but this particular sentence (yes, the one you're reading right now!) is not an example of it whereas each of the previous sentences, in this comment of mine, are and it relates to how the sentence begins. --[[User:Defiant|Defiant]] 11:39, 24 June 2009 (UTC)</strike>
 
*'''Support''' - Having personally made numerous changes to this article lately, I'm a lot happier with the majority of its content. The "clothing" section could still, IMO, be improved but that should not be a reason for preventing the article from achieving FA status as perfection is not required and the vast majority of this article is very informative and was so, even before the changes I made to it. --[[User:Defiant|Defiant]] 02:47, 1 July 2009 (UTC)
 
*'''Support''' - Thought it was an informative article, though I must admit a lack of knowledge of [[Star Trek: Enterprise]] in general. Made me want to watch more of the show though. - [http://memory-alpha.org/en/wiki/User:Archduk3 Archduk3] 22:32, 3 July 2009 (UTC)
 
   
 
==Nominations with objections==
 
==Nominations with objections==

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Nominations without objections

Nominations with objections

The Doctor

This is a fantastic article, all the information is sorted into good sections. This has been well researched and should, in my opinion, be a featured article. DaveSubspace Message 09:45, 23 May 2009 (UTC)

Support: An excellent and thorough article for an excellent character. The only thing I would change is "War Crimes" to something like "Accused War Crimes" since it is established that he (and Voyager) in fact committed none. DKqwerty 02:43, 2 June 2009 (UTC)
Support: An excellent article. Very informative. -- TrekFan Talk 21:39, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
Support: Though I would rather remove the photos of Kes and Janeway in the "relationships" section and add in photos of Denara Pel, his holo-family, etc. We know what K&J look like. Other than that, this is a fantastically well written and supported article that covers the many aspect of one of my favorite characters. -- DhaliaUnsung 22:00, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
Oppose: IMHO, this article is not particularly well-written! Its use of punctuation is often incorrect (such as repeated inclusion of too many commas) and it has too many duplicated links (one example of which is to the Kes article). The major block paragraph about Seven of Nine should also be divided into smaller paragraphs, for easier readability. In addition, I agree with the comment above - that more useful images could be used in the "Relationships" section. And is it "the Doctor" or "The Doctor"? The article uses both! I think one method of these should definitively be settled upon (probably the same as is used in script sources), unless both are used in episode scripts (in which case, this information can be added to the "Background Information" section). Each of my criticisms above are minor nitpicks, however, and should be fairly easy to reconcile. I do, however, believe it is notable that two users have now commented on the use of images and how they may be improved. --Defiant 11:10, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
I've researched the naming tradition and all the scripts I could find refer to him as "the Doctor" except, of course, when written as the first words of a sentence. I've therefore changed the references in the article to fit this method. I've also tried to improve the use of punctuation and attempted to correct obvious grammatical errors, but the page still includes many examples of these as well as quite a few rambling sentences, strung together with "and"s! These would require someone more in-the-know about the fine details of grammatical structure (as well as a better knowledge of Voyager episodes) than I. --Defiant 13:32, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
I gave it a once over, but I'm sure it could use another. -- DhaliaUnsung 15:53, 15 June 2009 (UTC)
SupportBllasae 15:11, 19 June 2009 (UTC)
Support. - Bell'Orso 14:34, 26 June 2009 (UTC)
Defiant, do you still maintain your objection? If you do, or if there are other objections, I will resolve this as unsuccessful, as it has gone on long enough.--31dot 02:30, 10 July 2009 (UTC)

Sovereign class

I would like to nominate this article for FA status, as I believe it is a fully comprehensive article, covering all aspects of the Sovereign class design. I do not believe anything more can be added to this article. -- TrekFan Talk 23:19, 30 June 2009 (UTC)

  • Comment - I don't believe adequate citations have been utilized, as some sections of this article don't cite even a single source! --Defiant 02:47, 1 July 2009 (UTC)
  • Comment - Would anyone else like to comment? -- TrekFan Talk 23:45, 10 July 2009 (UTC)
  • Oppose: IMO there are some issues with this page. There is nothing on the change in the observation lounge, granted this isn't an article on the Enterprise, but it really is since she is the only source. The deck arrangement is missing details, deck 16 has no information from Star Trek: First Contact at all but has the tag; also the MSD is uncited and may be wrong, since the deck 16 Worf pointed to in FC is not the deck 16 as described prior. And, as Defiant said, there is a overall lack of citations. I'll try to get the first two things I mentioned when I can, but I don't have time to rewatch all 4 films. - Archduk3:talk 00:11, 11 July 2009 (UTC)

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