Changes: Chronister II

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Chronister II was the inhabited second planet in the Chronister system.

In 2328, Dick Brownfield boarded the SS Manila at Chronister II, bound for Thomsworld Spaceport. This information was part of a passenger manifest recorded in the commercial transport database and reviewed by Data in 2370. (TNG: "Inheritance", okudagram)

It was named for special effects artist Richard Chronister. ^{(citation needed • edit)}

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-'''Chronister II''' was the [[second planets|second]] [[planet]] in the Chronister system, that was in or near [[Federation]] space.
+'''Chronister II''' was the [[inhabited planets|inhabited]] [[second planets|second]] [[planet]] in the Chronister [[star systems|system]].
-In [[2328]], [[Captain]] [[Dick Brownfield (Captain)|Dick Brownfield]] boarded the {{SS|Manila}} at Chronister II, bound for [[Thomsworld Spaceport]]. This information was part of a commercial passenger manifest database recorded in Federation records reviewed by [[Data]] in [[2370]]. ({{TNG|Inheritance}})
-{{bginfo|This planet only appeared on an [[okudagram]] on a [[viewscreen]] visible in freeze frame. It was named for special effects artist [[Richard Chronister]].}}
+In [[2328]], [[Dick Brownfield (Captain)|Dick Brownfield]] boarded the {{SS|Manila}} at Chronister II, bound for [[Thomsworld Spaceport]]. This information was part of a passenger manifest recorded in the [[commercial transport database]] and reviewed by [[Data]] in [[2370]]. ({{TNG|Inheritance}}, ''[[okudagram]]'')
+{{bginfo|It was named for special effects artist [[Richard Chronister]]. {{incite}}}}
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